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From: Michel Lavonds <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] share/man/man4/man4.i386/fe.4 grammar, and 2 questions
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>Number:         66824
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] share/man/man4/man4.i386/fe.4 grammar, and 2 questions
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue May 18 10:20:12 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Mon Jan 17 11:32:41 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Mon Jan 17 11:32:41 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Michel Lavonds
>Release:        4.8-RELEASE-p13
>Organization:
Ecdysiasts United For Overdressing
>Environment:
>Description:
See patch for grammar nits. Also, I have 2 questions:

1- What does "lair" mean or stand for in the following excerpt?

  Setting
  .Dv "FE_DEBUG=2"
  makes standard debugging codes be included,
  setting the amount of logged messages middle.
  Messages on lair events and/or questionable conditions
  are logged under this setting.

Obvious possibilities popping into mind are "rare" or "layer", but I'm not sure which (if either).

2- Shouldn't the mention of XNS (and IPX?) be removed, given that it's no longer supported in recent kernels?

>How-To-Repeat:
man 4 fe
>Fix:
--- fe.4.orig	Sun May  9 08:30:06 2004
+++ fe.4	Sun May  9 08:33:19 2004
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
 Setting
 .Dv "FE_DEBUG=3"
 makes all debugging codes be included,
-and set the amount of legged messages maximum.
+and set the amount of logged messages maximum.
 Redundant messages such as those reporting usual actions
 or dumping register values
 are logged under this setting.
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@
 .Nm
 driver has some features and limitations
 which depend on adapter hardware models.
-The following is a summary of such dependency.
+The following is a summary of these dependencies.
 .Ss Fujitsu FMV-180 series adapters
 Both automatic IRQ detection and automatic I/O port address detection
 is available with these adapters.
@@ -303,8 +303,8 @@
 The unnecessarily allocated clusters are freed within short lifetime,
 and it will not affect long term kernel memory usage.
 .Pp
-Although XNS and IPX supports are included in the driver,
-they are never be tested and must have a lot of bugs.
+Although support for XNS and IPX is included in the driver,
+they were never tested and must have a lot of bugs.
 .Sh AUTHORS, COPYRIGHT AND DISCLAIMER
 The
 .Nm
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Wed Jul 7 21:37:58 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
A slightly modified version of the patch has been committed to -CURRENT. 
Thanks for your help with the manpages :) 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Jul 7 21:37:58 GMT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll handle the MFC. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66824 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Mon Jan 17 11:30:30 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
RELENG_5 was branched quite soem time *after* my commit to HEAD.  These 
changes are now part of FreeBSD 5.X versions of fe(4).  The 4.X branch 
will enter EOL deorbit sequence shortly, so there is no compelling reason 
to merge these to 4.X or keep this PR open. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66824 
>Unformatted:
