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From: Fumiyoshi TAOKA <fmysh@iijmio-mail.jp>
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Subject: A typo in doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap/article.sgml.
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>Number:         66729
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       A typo in doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap/article.sgml.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    josef
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun May 16 23:20:20 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Sun May 16 23:36:48 PDT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Sun May 16 23:36:48 PDT 2004
>Originator:     Fumiyoshi TAOKA
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.9-RELEASE-p5 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
A typo in doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap/article.sgml.

>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

--- article.sgml.orig   Mon May 17 14:55:25 2004
+++ article.sgml        Mon May 17 14:55:36 2004
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
     <para>Our intent is to avoid repeating that scenario with &os; 5.x.
       Delaying the &t.releng.5; branch until it is stable and production quality
       will ensure that it stays maintainable and provides a compelling reason
-      to upgrade from 4.<replaceable>X</replaceable>,  To do this, we must
+      to upgrade from 4.<replaceable>X</replaceable>.  To do this, we must
       identify the current areas of weakness and set clear goals for
       resolving them.  This document contains what we as the release
       engineering team feel are the milestones and issues that must be
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->josef 
Responsible-Changed-By: josef 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun May 16 23:26:23 PDT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
i'll handle this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66729 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: josef 
State-Changed-When: Sun May 16 23:36:42 PDT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66729 
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