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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr>
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Subject: minor typo in dialup-firewall article.
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>Number:         66544
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       minor typo in dialup-firewall article.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue May 11 12:10:17 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Wed May 12 02:07:31 PDT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Wed May 12 02:07:31 PDT 2004
>Originator:     Giorgos Keramidas
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.2-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

System: FreeBSD gothmog.gr 5.2-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.2-CURRENT #12: Tue May 11
 05:46:24 EEST 2004 sysop@gothmog.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CELERON i386

>Description:

While updating my local translation of the dialup-firewall article in
Greek, I noticed that the word 'safely' appears twice in the English
version.  See attached patch...

One other minor correction we might want to make is s/anyway/any way/
two lines below the line affected by this patch.  I'm not sure if it's
really necessary, so I left this second change out, but my intuition
says that "any way" is slightly better.

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- patchfile begins here ---
Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/dialup-firewall/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.35
diff -u -r1.35 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	10 May 2004 09:55:56 -0000	1.35
+++ article.sgml	11 May 2004 18:57:19 -0000
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@
 
     <para>You now have a fully functional firewall that only allows
       connections to ports 22 and 80 and will log any other connection
-      attempts. You may now safely safely reboot and the firewall should
+      attempts. You may now safely reboot and the firewall should
       be automatically started and the ruleset loaded.  If you find this
       incorrect in anyway or experience any problems, or have any
       suggestions to improve this page, please email me.</para>
--- patchfile ends here ---

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Wed May 12 02:06:39 PDT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
I fixed both typos.  Thanks Giorgos! :) 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66544 
>Unformatted:
