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From: Michel Lavonds <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] share/man/man4/csa.4 grammar nits
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>Number:         66483
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] share/man/man4/csa.4 grammar nits
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon May 10 10:50:11 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Sat May 12 11:25:42 GMT 2007
>Last-Modified:  Sat May 12 11:25:42 GMT 2007
>Originator:     Michel Lavonds
>Release:        4.8-RELEASE-p13
>Organization:
Ecdysiasts United For Overdressing
>Environment:
>Description:
Patch says it all, really
>How-To-Repeat:
man 4 csa
>Fix:
--- share/man/man4/csa.4.orig	Thu May  6 03:48:46 2004
+++ share/man/man4/csa.4	Thu May  6 03:51:44 2004
@@ -46,12 +46,10 @@
 Crystal Semiconductor CS4280 Audio Controller
 .El
 .Pp
-Some onboard CS4610 chips are accompanied by the CS423x ISA codec
-instead of the CS4297 AC97 codec.
-Such configurations are not
-supported by
-.Nm
-yet.
+Some onboard CS4610 chips come with a CS423x ISA codec
+instead of a CS4297 AC97 codec.
+.Nm Csa
+does not support these configurations yet.
 .Sh HISTORY
 The
 .Nm
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: pav 
State-Changed-When: Sat May 12 11:25:21 UTC 2007 
State-Changed-Why:  
The new text is not much of an improvement - firstly, the original text is 
perfectly fine. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66483 
>Unformatted:
