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From: Michel Lavonds <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING tyops
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>Number:         66481
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING tyops
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon May 10 10:40:15 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Mon May 10 13:39:51 PDT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Tue May 11 19:50:20 PDT 2004
>Originator:     Michel Lavonds
>Release:        4.8-RELEASE-p13
>Organization:
Ecdysiasts United For Overdressing
>Environment:
>Description:
      
>How-To-Repeat:
more /usr/share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING
>Fix:
Patch also available at: http://www.livejournal.com/users/pauamma/1231.html

--- share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING.orig	Wed May  5 09:17:25 2004
+++ share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING	Wed May  5 09:19:47 2004
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
     file in / or /usr on a target machine instead of the template machine.
     If the target machine is updated once a night from cron, the sysop
     quickly learns not to do this ( because his changes get overwritten
-    overnight ).  With a manual update, these sorts of mistakes can propogate
+    overnight ).  With a manual update, these sorts of mistakes can propagate
     for weeks or months before they are caught.

                             TEMPLATE COPYING AND SAFETY
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@
     softlinks, hardlinks, files, modification times, uid, gid, flags, perms,
     and so forth.  The program incorporates several major features:

-        *   The program refuses, absolutely, to cross partition boundries.
+        *   The program refuses, absolutely, to cross partition boundaries.
             i.e. if you were copying the template /usr from an NFS mount to
             your /usr, and you had a mount point called /usr/home, the
             template copying program would *NOT* descend into /usr/home on
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@
             This is a safety.

         *   The program accesses a file called .cpignore in each directory
-            it descending into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions
+            it descends into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions
             for that directory -- that is, files not to copy or mess with.

             This is a templating function.

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: simon 
State-Changed-When: Mon May 10 13:39:43 PDT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66481 

From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To: =?X-UNKNOWN?Q?Michel_Lavond=E8s?= <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/66481: [patch] share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING
 tyops
Date: Mon, 10 May 2004 17:12:01 -0600 (MDT)

 On Mon, 10 May 2004, Michel Lavond=E8s wrote:
 
 > Patch also available at: http://www.livejournal.com/users/pauamma/1231.ht=
 ml
 >
 > --- share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING.orig=09Wed May  5 09:17:25 =
 2004
 > +++ share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING=09Wed May  5 09:19:47 2004
 
 > -            it descending into on the source to obtain a list of excepti=
 ons
 > +            it descends into on the source to obtain a list of exception=
 s
                                 ^^
 The "on" should be removed.
 
 -Warren Block * Rapid City, South Dakota USA

From: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Michel_Lavond=E8s?= <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
To: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, <freebsd-doc@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: docs/66481: [patch] share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING
 tyops
Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 02:30:32 -0400 (EDT)

 On Mon, 10 May 2004, Warren Block wrote:
 
 > On Mon, 10 May 2004, Michel Lavonds wrote:
 > 
 > > --- share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING.orig	Wed May  5 09:17:25 2004
 > > +++ share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING	Wed May  5 09:19:47 2004
 > 
 > > -            it descending into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions
 > > +            it descends into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions
 >                                 ^^
 > The "on" should be removed.
 
 I don't think so. The whole sentence reads as follows:
 
         *   The program accesses a file called .cpignore in each directory
             it descends into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions
             for that directory -- that is, files not to copy or mess with.
 
 Perhaps it could be reworded as "each directory of the source [tree] into 
 which it descends", but this is (IMHO) a matter of taste, and I'd rather 
 not get involved in those.
 
 -- 
 "I'd ask if you'd found the right sort of isolated wasteland for your
 citadel of dread yet, but that would be a silly question; you're in Utah,
 after all." --ESR to Darl McBride (Chief Excessive Ossifier of Squandered 
 Clues Obstination), in http://www.catb.org/~esr/writings/mcbride.html
 

From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Michel_Lavond=E8s?= <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/66481: [patch] share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING
 tyops
Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 17:37:28 -0600 (MDT)

 On Tue, 11 May 2004, [ISO-8859-1] Michel Lavond=E8s wrote:
 
 > > The "on" should be removed.
 >
 > I don't think so. The whole sentence reads as follows:
 >
 >         *   The program accesses a file called .cpignore in each director=
 y
 >             it descends into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions
 >             for that directory -- that is, files not to copy or mess with=
 =2E
 >
 > Perhaps it could be reworded as "each directory of the source [tree] into
 > which it descends", but this is (IMHO) a matter of taste, and I'd rather
 > not get involved in those.
 
 Ah--it's not an extra word, but a clash of phrasing.  Sorry, I saw it
 out of context.  How about:
 
              Each source directory is checked for a file called
              .cpignore. If present, this file contains a list of
              exceptions: files that are not to be copied or messed with.
 
 "Messed with" is a little, uh, messy.  It doesn't really tell the reader
 what might happen to a file.  It could be copied, or it could be
 overwritten.  The last three words could be dropped if it just won't be
 copied; otherwise, seems like "cpignore" is a misnomer.
 
 -Warren Block * Rapid City, South Dakota USA

From: "pauamma@nerim.net" <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
To: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, <freebsd-doc@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: docs/66481: [patch] share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING
 tyops
Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 22:45:30 -0400 (EDT)

 On Tue, 11 May 2004, Warren Block wrote:
 
 > On Tue, 11 May 2004, [ISO-8859-1] Michel Lavonds wrote:
 > 
 > > I don't think so. The whole sentence reads as follows: [snipped]
 > 
 > How about:
 > 
 >              Each source directory is checked for a file called
 >              .cpignore. If present, this file contains a list of
 >              exceptions: files that are not to be copied or messed with.
 
 Perhaps. Feel free to suggest (or commit if you're a committer) your own 
 wording as a PR if you feel strongly about it. I just wanted the obvious 
 grammar problem fixed, and it is, so I'm content. :-)
 
 -- 
 "I'd ask if you'd found the right sort of isolated wasteland for your
 citadel of dread yet, but that would be a silly question; you're in Utah,
 after all." --ESR to Darl McBride (Chief Excessive Ossifier of Squandered 
 Clues Obstination), in http://www.catb.org/~esr/writings/mcbride.html
 
>Unformatted:
