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Date: Mon, 26 Apr 2004 16:54:05 +0400
From: Denis Peplin <den@FreeBSD.org>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: incorrect references to ppp.conf in handbook/ppp-and-slip

>Number:         65988
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       incorrect references to ppp.conf in handbook/ppp-and-slip
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Apr 26 06:00:31 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Thu Aug 18 21:21:45 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Thu Aug 18 21:21:45 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Denis Peplin <den@FreeBSD.org>
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p3 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
 System: FreeBSD den.vist 5.2.1-RELEASE-p3 FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p3 #1: Thu Mar 18 15:28:46 MSK 2004 den@den.vist:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386
>Description:
 	ppp.conf example was changed, but references to numbered lines was not.
 	i'm not sure about fix below, so put it here
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
 
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.132
diff -u -r1.132 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	26 Apr 2004 06:22:32 -0000	1.132
+++ chapter.sgml	26 Apr 2004 12:40:46 -0000
@@ -989,25 +989,13 @@
  	    linkend="userppp-dynamicIP">PPP and Dynamic IP addresses</link>
  	    sections, the following alterations must be made:</para>

-	  <programlisting>7       set login
-&hellip;
-12      set authname <replaceable>MyUserName</replaceable>
-13      set authkey <replaceable>MyPassword</replaceable></programlisting>
+	  <programlisting>13      set authname <replaceable>MyUserName</replaceable>
+14      set authkey <replaceable>MyPassword</replaceable>
+15      set login</programlisting>

  	  <variablelist>
  	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term>Line 7:</term>
-
-	      <listitem>
-		<para>Your ISP will not normally require that you log into
-		  the server if you are using PAP or CHAP.  You must
-		  therefore disable your <quote>set login</quote>
-		  string.</para>
-	      </listitem>
-	    </varlistentry>
-
-	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term>Line 12:</term>
+	      <term>Line 13:</term>

  	      <listitem>
  		<para>This line specifies your PAP/CHAP user name.  You
@@ -1017,7 +1005,7 @@
  	    </varlistentry>

  	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term>Line 13:</term>
+	      <term>Line 14:</term>
  	      <indexterm><primary>password</primary></indexterm>
  	      <listitem>
  		<para>This line specifies your PAP/CHAP password.  You
@@ -1025,14 +1013,25 @@
  		  <replaceable>MyPassword</replaceable>.  You may want to
  		  add an additional line, such as:</para>

-		<programlisting>15      accept PAP</programlisting>
+		<programlisting>19      accept PAP</programlisting>

  		<para>or</para>

-		<programlisting>15      accept CHAP</programlisting>
+		<programlisting>19      accept CHAP</programlisting>

  		<para>to make it obvious that this is the intention, but
  		  PAP and CHAP are both accepted by default.</para>
+	      </listitem>
+	    </varlistentry>
+
+	    <varlistentry>
+	      <term>Line 15:</term>
+
+	      <listitem>
+		<para>Your ISP will not normally require that you log into
+		  the server if you are using PAP or CHAP.  You must
+		  therefore disable your <quote>set login</quote>
+		  string.</para>
  	      </listitem>
  	    </varlistentry>
  	  </variablelist>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Class-Changed-From-To: sw-bug->doc-bug 
Class-Changed-By: ceri 
Class-Changed-When: Tue Apr 27 12:02:11 PDT 2004 
Class-Changed-Why:  
Reassign misfiled PR. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: gnats-admin->freebsd-doc 
Responsible-Changed-By: ceri 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Apr 27 12:02:11 PDT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Reassign misfiled PR. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=65988 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: pav 
State-Changed-When: Thu Aug 18 21:21:30 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
This was fixed on April 27 2004 by submitter himself. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=65988 
>Unformatted:
