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Date: Thu, 26 Feb 2004 10:58:16 -0500 (EST)
From: Christopher Nehren <apeiron@comcast.net>
Reply-To: Christopher Nehren <apeiron@comcast.net>
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Subject: Fix some minor grammar errors in gssapi.3.
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>Number:         63396
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Fix some minor grammar errors in gssapi.3.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    josef
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Feb 26 08:00:39 PST 2004
>Closed-Date:    Fri May 07 00:49:23 PDT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Fri May 07 00:49:23 PDT 2004
>Originator:     Christopher Nehren
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.2-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD prophecy.dyndns.org 5.2-RELEASE FreeBSD 5.2-RELEASE #0: Wed Feb 25 19:25:32 EST 2004 root@prophecy.dyndns.org:/usr/src/sys/i386/compile/PROPHECY i386

This also exists in 5.2.1, as I just cvsup'd and copied the gssapi.3 file from
my src/ tree for which to do my diff'ing.

	
>Description:

Fix some minor (but nonetheless annoying) grammar errors in gssapi.3.

>How-To-Repeat:
man gssapi
>Fix:

There's another part of gssapi.3 about which I'm concerned:
If a match for an entry is in both
.Nm [gssapi]
.Ar correct_des3_mic
and
.Nm [gssapi]
.Ar correct_des3_mic ,
the later will override.

I presume that the former should be broken_des3_mic, but since I haven't used
gssapi, I'm not sure. Here's a patch for the parts which are solely grammatical.

--- /usr/src/crypto/heimdal/lib/gssapi/gssapi.3	Thu Oct  9 15:36:20 2003
+++ ./gssapi.3	Thu Feb 26 10:52:18 2004
@@ -106,17 +106,17 @@
 .Fn gss_get_mic
 /
 .Fn gss_verify_mic .
-Its possible to modify the behavior of the generator of the MIC with
+It's possible to modify the behavior of the generator of the MIC with
 the
 .Pa krb5.conf
 configuration file so that old clients/servers will still
 work.
 .Pp
 New clients/servers will try both the old and new MIC in Heimdal 0.6.
-In 0.7 it will check only if configured and the compatibility code
-will be removed in 0.8.
+In 0.7 it will check only if configured (the compatibility code
+will be removed in 0.8).
 .Pp
-Heimdal 0.6 still generates by default the broken GSS-API DES3 mic,
+Heimdal 0.6 still generates by default the broken GSS-API DES3 mic;
 this will change in 0.7 to generate correct des3 mic.
 .Pp
 To turn on compatibility with older clients and servers, change the
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 .Nm [gssapi]
 .Ar correct_des3_mic .
 .Pp
-If a match for a entry is in both
+If a match for an entry is in both
 .Nm [gssapi]
 .Ar correct_des3_mic
 and
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
 .Sh BUGS
 All of 0.5.x versions of
 .Nm heimdal
-had broken token delegations in the client side, the server side was
+had broken token delegations in the client side; the server side was
 correct.
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr krb5 3 ,
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->josef 
Responsible-Changed-By: josef 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue May 4 10:24:08 PDT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=63396 
State-Changed-From-To: open->feedback 
State-Changed-By: josef 
State-Changed-When: Thu May 6 06:21:36 PDT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
I sent a patch based on your fixes to heimdal-bugs@pdc.kth.se. 
Lets see what they say. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=63396 
State-Changed-From-To: feedback->closed 
State-Changed-By: josef 
State-Changed-When: Fri May 7 00:49:02 PDT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
This got committed into heimdal cvs. 
Thanks for your help. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=63396 
>Unformatted:
