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>Number:         61512
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] trivial fix for handbook/l10n.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    blackend
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Jan 17 22:00:30 PST 2004
>Closed-Date:    Fri Jan 23 09:25:20 PST 2004
>Last-Modified:  Fri Jan 23 09:25:20 PST 2004
>Originator:     Hiroo Ono
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.9-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD chrysanthe.oikumene.gcd.org 4.9-STABLE FreeBSD 4.9-STABLE #8: Sat Dec 27 15:41:28 JST 2003 hiroo@chrysanthe.oikumene.gcd.org:/build/usr/src/sys/CHRYSANTHE i386


>Description:
I made a patch for the following matter, which I noticed while I was
translating the document.
 (1) To be strict, it is "X Window System" and not "X Windows".
     It is a little paranoiac though.
 (2) The document lists encoding names following "i.e.".
     I think "e.g." is better because listed encoding names are
     just a few of its category.
 (3) removed trailing white space.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
patch attached.

--- chapter.sgml.en.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.orig	2004-01-15 11:20:20.000000000 +0900
+++ chapter.sgml	2004-01-16 10:37:26.000000000 +0900
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
       shell.</para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>How to configure your console for non-English
       languages.</para></listitem>
-      <listitem><para>How to use X Windows effectively with different
+      <listitem><para>How to use X Window System effectively with different
       languages.</para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>Where to find more information about writing
       i18n-compliant applications.</para></listitem>
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@
 
     <sect2>
       <title>What Is I18N/L10N?</title>
-    <indexterm><primary>internationalization</primary></indexterm> 
-    <indexterm><primary>localization</primary></indexterm> 
+    <indexterm><primary>internationalization</primary></indexterm>
+    <indexterm><primary>localization</primary></indexterm>
 
       <para>Developers shortened internationalization into the term I18N,
 	counting the number of letters between the first and the last
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
 	usually do recognize 8-bit characters.  Depending on the
 	implementation, users may be required to compile an application
 	with wide or multibyte characters support, or configure it correctly.
-	To be able to input and process wide or multibyte characters, the <ulink 
+	To be able to input and process wide or multibyte characters, the <ulink
 	url="../../../../ports/index.html">FreeBSD Ports collection</ulink> has provided
 	each language with different programs.  Refer to the I18N
 	documentation in the respective FreeBSD Port.</para>
@@ -179,12 +179,12 @@
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Language specific single C chars character sets
-	  (see &man.multibyte.3;), i.e.,
+	  (see &man.multibyte.3;), e.g.,
 	    ISO-8859-1, ISO-8859-15, KOI8-R, CP437.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Wide or multibyte encodings, i.e. EUC, Big5.</para>
+	  <para>Wide or multibyte encodings, e.g. EUC, Big5.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@
 	:lang=de_DE.ISO8859-1:</programlisting>
 
 	    <indexterm><primary>Traditional Chinese</primary><secondary>BIG-5 encoding</secondary></indexterm>
-	    <para>Here is an example of a 
+	    <para>Here is an example of a
 	       <filename>.login_conf</filename> that sets the variables
 	       for Traditional Chinese in BIG-5 encoding.  Notice the many
 	       more variables set because some software does not respect
@@ -288,14 +288,14 @@
 me:\
 	lang=zh_TW.Big5:\
 	lc_all=zh_TW.Big:\
-	lc_collate=zh_TW.Big5:\ 
+	lc_collate=zh_TW.Big5:\
 	lc_ctype=zh_TW.Big5:\
 	lc_messages=zh_TW.Big5:\
 	lc_monetary=zh_TW.Big5:\
 	lc_numeric=zh_TW.Big5:\
 	lc_time=zh_TW.Big5:\
 	charset=big5:\
-	xmodifiers="@im=xcin": #Setting the XIM Input Server</programlisting> 
+	xmodifiers="@im=xcin": #Setting the XIM Input Server</programlisting>
 
 	    <para>See <link linkend="adm-setup">Administrator Level
 	      Setup</link> and &man.login.conf.5; for more details.</para>
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@
 
 	      <listitem>
 		<para>An alternative variant is answering the specified
-		  language each time that 
+		  language each time that
 <screen><prompt>Enter login class: default []: </prompt></screen>
 		  appears from &man.adduser.8;.</para>
 	      </listitem>
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@
       <programlisting>scrnmap=<replaceable>screenmap_name</replaceable>
 keymap=<replaceable>keymap_name</replaceable>
 keychange="<replaceable>fkey_number sequence</replaceable>"</programlisting>
-	
+
       <para>The <replaceable>screenmap_name</replaceable> here is taken
         from the <filename>/usr/share/syscons/scrnmaps</filename>
 	directory, without the <filename>.scm</filename> suffix.  A
@@ -669,15 +669,15 @@
     <indexterm>
       <primary><application>MySQL</application></primary>
     </indexterm>
-    <para>However, some applications such as 
-      <application>MySQL</application> need to be have the
+    <para>However, some applications such as
+      <application>MySQL</application> need to have the
       <filename>Makefile</filename> configured with the specific
       charset.  This is usually done in the
       <filename>Makefile</filename> or done by passing a value to
       <application>configure</application> in the source.</para>
   </sect1>
 
-  <sect1 id="lang-setup">	
+  <sect1 id="lang-setup">
     <title>Localizing FreeBSD to Specific Languages</title>
 
     <sect2 id="ru-localize">
@@ -813,7 +813,7 @@
 	      and issue the following command:</para>
 
 	    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
-      
+
 	    <para>The above port installs the latest version of the KOI8-R
 	      fonts.  <application>&xfree86; 3.3</application> already has some KOI8-R fonts, but these
 	      are scaled better.</para>
--- chapter.sgml.en.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->blackend 
Responsible-Changed-By: blackend 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jan 18 00:49:01 PST 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=61512 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Fri Jan 23 09:23:24 PST 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
I committed a slightly different version of your patch, i.e., I did not 
removed trailing spaces (this sort of change must be done in a separate 
commit, and in this case does not worth a commit).  Thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=61512 
>Unformatted:
