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Subject: Some suggestions for the Basics chapter of the handbook. 
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>Number:         56929
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Some suggestions for the Basics chapter of the handbook.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Sep 16 13:30:19 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:    Wed Sep 17 00:42:37 PDT 2003
>Last-Modified:  Wed Sep 17 00:42:37 PDT 2003
>Originator:     Marco Trentini
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.8-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD einstein.lab 4.8-STABLE FreeBSD 4.8-STABLE #0: Thu Aug 21 17:29:19 CEST 2003 root@einstein.lab:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/EINSTEIN i386


	
>Description:
Some suggestions for the Basics chapter of the handbook. See the fix section.	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	

--- chapter.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.old	Tue Sep 16 22:03:55 2003
+++ chapter.sgml	Tue Sep 16 22:12:29 2003
@@ -37,24 +37,36 @@
 	<para>How &unix; file permissions work.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
+	<para>Which the FreeBSD directory hierarch is.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>How to mount and unmount file systems.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
 	<para>What processes, daemons, and signals are.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>What a shell is, and how to change your default login
-	environment.</para>
+	  environment.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>How to use basic text editors.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to read manual pages for more information.</para>
+	<para>What devices and device nodes are.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>How to use the <quote>virtual consoles</quote> of
+	<para>How to use the <quote>virtual consoles</quote> of
 	  FreeBSD.</para>
       </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Which the 3 currently <quote>dominant</quote> executable formats
+	  for UNIX are.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>How to read manual pages for more information.</para>
+      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="permissions">
--- chapter.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Wed Sep 17 00:40:26 PDT 2003 
State-Changed-Why:  
I committed a different version of your patch, and I also did not mix 
the content changes and whitespaces ones.  Thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=56929 
>Unformatted:
