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From: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
Reply-To: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
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Subject: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags
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>Number:         56902
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Sep 15 13:40:15 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:    Sat Oct 18 07:15:13 PDT 2003
>Last-Modified:  Sat Oct 18 07:15:13 PDT 2003
>Originator:     Josef El-Rayes
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gina.at 5.1-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT #1: Sat Sep 13 13:22:16 CEST 2003 root@gina.at:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GINA i386


	
>Description:
		docs/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/fbsd-from-scratch/article.sgml:
		o add missing application-tags
		o use note instead of itemizedlist
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	

--- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.orig	Mon Sep 15 18:39:23 2003
+++ article.sgml	Mon Sep 15 18:50:50 2003
@@ -396,9 +396,9 @@
 
     <para>Other areas are prepared for configuration, but will not work
       until stage two is completed.  For example we have copied files to
-      configure printing and X11.  Printing however is likely to need
+      configure printing and <application>X11</application>.  Printing however is likely to need
       applications not found in the base system, like &postscript;
-      utilities.  X11 will not run before we have compiled the server,
+      utilities. <application>X11</application> will not run before we have compiled the server,
       libraries and programs.</para>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
       <literal>CONFIGURE_ARGS</literal>.  The port
       <filename>Makefile</filename> will use this as an initial value
       and augment some other essential args.  The difference to
-      specifying a <filename>make</filename> variable on the command line
+      specifying a <application>make</application> variable on the command line
       with</para>
 
     <programlisting>news inn-stable make CONFIGURE_ARGS="--enable-uucp-rnews --enable-setgid-inews" install</programlisting>
@@ -566,14 +566,9 @@
       <literal>4-STABLE</literal> may want to consider the following
       areas:</para>
 
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>If you do not use the device file system
+	<note><para>If you do not use the device file system
         (<literal>devfs</literal>) you may want to create devices for
         some of your hardware with &man.MAKEDEV.8; in stage one, step
-        six.</para>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
+        six.</para></note>
   </sect1>
 </article>
--- article.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org>
To: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/56902: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags
Date: Tue, 16 Sep 2003 22:38:11 +0200

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 On 2003.09.15 22:35:55 +0200, Josef El-Rayes wrote:
 
 > --- article.sgml.orig	Mon Sep 15 18:39:23 2003
 > +++ article.sgml	Mon Sep 15 18:50:50 2003
 > @@ -396,9 +396,9 @@
 > =20
 >      <para>Other areas are prepared for configuration, but will not work
 >        until stage two is completed.  For example we have copied files to
 > -      configure printing and X11.  Printing however is likely to need
 > +      configure printing and <application>X11</application>.  Printing h=
 owever is likely to need
 
 I don't think X11 should be marked up as application, since it is not
 really an application, but rather the protocol/framework.  Have you
 found any other places where it's marked up with the application tag?
 
 --=20
 Simon L. Nielsen
 FreeBSD Documentation Team
 
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From: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
To: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/56902: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags
Date: Tue, 16 Sep 2003 23:14:53 +0200

 "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> wrote:
 > On 2003.09.15 22:35:55 +0200, Josef El-Rayes wrote:
 > 
 > > --- article.sgml.orig	Mon Sep 15 18:39:23 2003
 > > +++ article.sgml	Mon Sep 15 18:50:50 2003
 > > @@ -396,9 +396,9 @@
 > >  
 > >      <para>Other areas are prepared for configuration, but will not work
 > >        until stage two is completed.  For example we have copied files to
 > > -      configure printing and X11.  Printing however is likely to need
 > > +      configure printing and <application>X11</application>.  Printing however is likely to need
 > 
 > I don't think X11 should be marked up as application, since it is not
 > really an application, but rather the protocol/framework.  Have you
 > found any other places where it's marked up with the application tag?
 
 for me it was in this association talking about X11 as an association,
 but i looked at the handbook chapter about X and only XFree86 was marked
 up as application so you are right here.
 
 shall i redo this patch and pr 56903 to leave X11 with markup?
 
 -josef
 
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 "Make World - Not War!"

From: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org>
To: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/56902: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags
Date: Wed, 17 Sep 2003 00:22:06 +0200

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 On 2003.09.16 23:14:53 +0200, Josef El-Rayes wrote:
 > "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> wrote:
 > > I don't think X11 should be marked up as application, since it is not
 > > really an application, but rather the protocol/framework.  Have you
 > > found any other places where it's marked up with the application tag?
 >=20
 > for me it was in this association talking about X11 as an association,
 > but i looked at the handbook chapter about X and only XFree86 was marked
 > up as application so you are right here.
 >=20
 > shall i redo this patch and pr 56903 to leave X11 with markup?
 
 I think that would be preferable.
 
 --=20
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 FreeBSD Documentation Team
 
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From: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/56902: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags
Date: Sun, 21 Sep 2003 17:15:34 +0200

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 hi!
 
 i reworked the patch to not touch X11.
 it marks up "make" as application and not as filename.
 it marks up a hint as "note:" and not as a single item in an
 itemizedlist.
 
 greets, josef
 -- 
 www: http://www.daemon.li
 nic-hdl: JER1080312-NICAT
 BSD in AT: www.bsdcode.at
 "Make World - Not War!"
 
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 --- article.sgml.orig	Sun Aug 17 18:25:32 2003
 +++ article.sgml	Sun Sep 21 17:10:41 2003
 @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
        <literal>CONFIGURE_ARGS</literal>.  The port
        <filename>Makefile</filename> will use this as an initial value
        and augment some other essential args.  The difference to
 -      specifying a <filename>make</filename> variable on the command line
 +      specifying a <application>make</application> variable on the command line
        with</para>
  
      <programlisting>news inn-stable make CONFIGURE_ARGS="--enable-uucp-rnews --enable-setgid-inews" install</programlisting>
 @@ -566,14 +566,10 @@
        <literal>4-STABLE</literal> may want to consider the following
        areas:</para>
  
 -    <itemizedlist>
 -      <listitem>
 -        <para>If you do not use the device file system
 +    <note><para>If you do not use the device file system
          (<literal>devfs</literal>) you may want to create devices for
          some of your hardware with &man.MAKEDEV.8; in stage one, step
 -        six.</para>
 -      </listitem>
 -    </itemizedlist>
 +        six.</para></note>
  
    </sect1>
  </article>
 
 --ReaqsoxgOBHFXBhH--
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: simon 
State-Changed-When: Sat Oct 18 07:14:07 PDT 2003 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed with some modifications, mainly to seperate whitespace 
changes from content changes. 
Thanks for the submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=56902 
>Unformatted:
