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Date: Tue, 26 Aug 2003 10:54:57 +0400
From: Denis Peplin <info@volginfo.ru>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: [PATCH] correct a few <para> in handbook

>Number:         55987
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] correct a few <para> in handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    blackend
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Aug 26 00:00:35 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:    Tue Aug 26 00:21:56 PDT 2003
>Last-Modified:  Mon Jul 05 16:44:25 GMT 2004
>Originator:     User &
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.1-RELEASE-p2 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD exp.local 5.1-RELEASE-p2 FreeBSD 5.1-RELEASE-p2 #0: Mon Aug 11 15:07:04 MSD 2003 root@exp.local:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/EXP i386


	<machine, os, target, libraries (multiple lines)>
>Description:
see fix below

>How-To-Repeat:
	<code/input/activities to reproduce the problem (multiple lines)>
>Fix:

Index: advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.234
diff -u -r1.234 chapter.sgml
--- advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	21 Jul 2003 13:35:50 -0000	1.234
+++ advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	25 Aug 2003 22:47:43 -0000
@@ -715,7 +715,7 @@
        point or another client directly. </para>
 
        <para>Typically, wireless clients only have one network device,
-       the wireless networking card.<para>
+       the wireless networking card.</para>
 
        <para>There are a few different ways to configure a wireless
         client.  These are based on the different wireless modes,
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@
       a <devicename>wi0</devicename> interface.  If you had a Cisco
       wireless device, it would come up as
       <devicename>an0</devicename>, and therefore you would use
-      &man.ancontrol.8;.<para>
+      &man.ancontrol.8;.</para>
 
     </sect4>
 
@@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@
 	that there is no support for spanning tree link management.</para>
 
       <para>A bridge can add latency to your ping times, especially for
-        traffic from one segment to another.
+        traffic from one segment to another.</para>
       
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
@@ -2060,7 +2060,7 @@
 	  <filename>/usr/share/examples/diskless/clone_root</filename>
 	  shell script.  This script needs customization, at least to adjust
 	  the place where the filesystem will be created (the
-	  <literal>DEST</literal> variable).
+	  <literal>DEST</literal> variable).</para>
 
 	<para>Refer to the comments at the top of the script for
 	    instructions.  They explain how the base filesystem is built,
@@ -6578,7 +6578,7 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Background on IPv6 Addresses</title>
       <para>There are different types of IPv6 addresses: Unicast, Anycast and
-	Multicast.<para>
+	Multicast.</para>
 
       <para>Unicast addresses are the well known addresses.  A packet sent
 	to a unicast address arrives exactly at the interface belonging to
Index: config/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.117
diff -u -r1.117 chapter.sgml
--- config/chapter.sgml	31 Jul 2003 11:26:43 -0000	1.117
+++ config/chapter.sgml	25 Aug 2003 22:42:19 -0000
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
 	  of the files required to support the system, the &man.ports.7;
 	  collection (recommended) and the source code (optional).  Both
 	  of which are optional at install time.
-	  At least 2 gigabytes would be recommended for this partition.
+	  At least 2 gigabytes would be recommended for this partition.</para>
 
 	<para>When selecting partition sizes, keep the space
 	  requirements in mind.  Running out of space in
@@ -548,6 +548,7 @@
 	option is available.  This will invoke the selected editor
 	with an empty file.  When the file is saved, it will be
 	automatically installed by the <command>crontab</command> command.
+	</para>
 
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
Index: desktop/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -r1.26 chapter.sgml
--- desktop/chapter.sgml	31 Jul 2003 05:54:50 -0000	1.26
+++ desktop/chapter.sgml	25 Aug 2003 22:40:17 -0000
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@
 	not worked for me.</para>
 
       <para>Install the <filename role="package">www/mozilla</filename> port,
-	if <application>Mozilla</application> is not already installed.
+	if <application>Mozilla</application> is not already installed.</para>
 
       <para>Now copy the <application>flash</application> plug-in files with:</para>
     
Index: linuxemu/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.89
diff -u -r1.89 chapter.sgml
--- linuxemu/chapter.sgml	13 Jul 2003 19:45:58 -0000	1.89
+++ linuxemu/chapter.sgml	25 Aug 2003 21:03:54 -0000
@@ -1474,7 +1474,7 @@
 	<para>It might also be a good idea to add <filename>linprocfs</filename>
 	  to <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>. See <command>man linprocfs</command>.
 	  Another parameter to set is <emphasis>kern.fallback_elf_brand=3</emphasis>
-	  which is done in file <filename>/etc/sysctl.conf</filename>.
+	  which is done in file <filename>/etc/sysctl.conf</filename>.</para>
       </sect3>
     </sect2>
 
Index: mirrors/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.312
diff -u -r1.312 chapter.sgml
--- mirrors/chapter.sgml	20 Jul 2003 19:51:02 -0000	1.312
+++ mirrors/chapter.sgml	25 Aug 2003 21:02:56 -0000
@@ -4698,7 +4698,7 @@
 	<term>United States of America</term>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>rsync://ftp-master.FreeBSD.org/<para>
+	  <para>rsync://ftp-master.FreeBSD.org/</para>
 
 	  <para>This server may only be used by FreeBSD primary mirror
 	    sites.</para>
Index: multimedia/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.52
diff -u -r1.52 chapter.sgml
--- multimedia/chapter.sgml	13 Jul 2003 20:36:52 -0000	1.52
+++ multimedia/chapter.sgml	25 Aug 2003 21:01:45 -0000
@@ -1175,7 +1175,7 @@
 
 	<para>To play from file, such as
 	  <filename>testfile.avi</filename> through one of the various
-	  video interfaces set the <option>-vo</option>:
+	  video interfaces set the <option>-vo</option>:</para>
 
 	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>mplayer -vo xv testfile.avi</userinput></screen>
 	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>mplayer -vo sdl testfile.avi</userinput></screen>
Index: security/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.164
diff -u -r1.164 chapter.sgml
--- security/chapter.sgml	30 Jul 2003 13:49:47 -0000	1.164
+++ security/chapter.sgml	25 Aug 2003 21:00:44 -0000
@@ -3178,7 +3178,7 @@
           <para>Once this packet arrives at <hostid
             role="ipaddr">W.X.Y.Z</hostid> it will need to
             <quote>unencapsulated</quote>, and delivered to <hostid
-            role="ipaddr">192.168.2.1</hostid>.
+            role="ipaddr">192.168.2.1</hostid>.</para>
       </orderedlist>
  
       <para>You can think of this as requiring a <quote>tunnel</quote>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->blackend 
Responsible-Changed-By: blackend 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Aug 26 00:03:39 PDT 2003 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=55987 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Tue Aug 26 00:19:44 PDT 2003 
State-Changed-Why:  
I committed a slightly modified version of your patch: I fixed an 
indentation problem for one added tag, and the patch failed on the 
multimedia chapter (your version was not up to date).  Thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=55987 
>Unformatted:
