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Date: Fri, 08 Aug 2003 21:38:43 +0200
From: Kirill Ponomarew <krion@FreeBSD.org>
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>Number:         55397
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Aug 08 12:40:09 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:    Fri Aug 08 13:39:01 PDT 2003
>Last-Modified:  Fri Aug 08 13:39:01 PDT 2003
>Originator:     Kirill Ponomarew
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.8-STABLE i386
>Organization:
Oberon.net 
>Environment:
 
        
>Description:
Typo in developers-handbook

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.30
diff -u -u -r1.30 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	2003/04/04 03:39:08	1.30
+++ chapter.sgml	2003/08/08 19:25:06
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD$
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.sgml,v 1.30 2003/04/04 03:39:08 seanc Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="tools">
@@ -1831,7 +1831,7 @@
       <para>Instead of using a proprietary macro language for
 	configuration, Emacs uses a version of Lisp specially adapted
 	for editors, known as Emacs Lisp.  This can be quite useful if
-	you want to go on and learn something like Common Lisp, as
+	you want to go on and learn something like Emacs Lisp, as
 	it is considerably smaller than Common Lisp (although still
 	quite big!).</para>
 
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@freebsd.org>
To: Kirill Ponomarew <krion@freebsd.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/55397: 
Date: Fri, 08 Aug 2003 12:43:32 -0700

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 If memory serves me right, Kirill Ponomarew wrote:
 
 >  <chapter id="tools">
 > @@ -1831,7 +1831,7 @@
 >        <para>Instead of using a proprietary macro language for
 >  	configuration, Emacs uses a version of Lisp specially adapted
 >  	for editors, known as Emacs Lisp.  This can be quite useful if
 > -	you want to go on and learn something like Common Lisp, as
 > +	you want to go on and learn something like Emacs Lisp, as
 >  	it is considerably smaller than Common Lisp (although still
 >  	quite big!).</para>
 
 Hmmm...the original text looks fine to me.  Why do you want to make 
 this change?
 
 Bruce.
 
 
 
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From: Kirill Ponomarew <krion@FreeBSD.org>
To: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@freebsd.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/55397:
Date: Fri, 8 Aug 2003 21:45:59 +0200

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 Hi,
 
 On Fri, Aug 08, 2003 at 12:43:32PM -0700, Bruce A. Mah wrote:
 > If memory serves me right, Kirill Ponomarew wrote:
 >=20
 > >  <chapter id=3D"tools">
 > > @@ -1831,7 +1831,7 @@
 > >        <para>Instead of using a proprietary macro language for
 > >  	configuration, Emacs uses a version of Lisp specially adapted
 > >  	for editors, known as Emacs Lisp.  This can be quite useful if
 > > -	you want to go on and learn something like Common Lisp, as
 > > +	you want to go on and learn something like Emacs Lisp, as
 > >  	it is considerably smaller than Common Lisp (although still
 > >  	quite big!).</para>
 >=20
 > Hmmm...the original text looks fine to me.  Why do you want to make=20
 > this change?
 
 Erm:
 
 This can be quite useful if you want to go on and learn
 something like Common Lisp, as it is considerably smaller than
 Common Lisp.
 
 I mean this sentence doesn't make too much sense for me ;-)
 
 What do you think ?
 
 -Kirill
 
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From: bmah@FreeBSD.org (Bruce A. Mah)
To: Kirill Ponomarew <krion@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@FreeBSD.org>,
	FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/55397: 
Date: Fri, 08 Aug 2003 12:53:14 -0700

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 If memory serves me right, Kirill Ponomarew wrote:
 
 > This can be quite useful if you want to go on and learn
 > something like Common Lisp, as it is considerably smaller than
 > Common Lisp.
 > 
 > I mean this sentence doesn't make too much sense for me ;-)
 
 OK.  The original meaning of the sentence is correct but it's just very
 unclear (your patch actually changed the meaning of the sentence).  How
 about:
 
 Working with Emacs Lisp can be quite helpful if you want to go on and
 learn something like Common Lisp.  Emacs Lisp has many features of
 Common Lisp, although it is considerably smaller and thus easier to
 master.
 
 (This changes the meaning of the sentence too, but it's consistent with 
 my understanding of the situation.)
 
 Bruce.
 
 
 
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From: Kirill Ponomarew <krion@FreeBSD.org>
To: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/55397:
Date: Fri, 8 Aug 2003 21:57:08 +0200

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 Hi,
 
 On Fri, Aug 08, 2003 at 12:53:14PM -0700, Bruce A. Mah wrote:
 =20
 > OK.  The original meaning of the sentence is correct but it's just very
 > unclear (your patch actually changed the meaning of the sentence).  How
 > about:
 >=20
 > Working with Emacs Lisp can be quite helpful if you want to go on and
 > learn something like Common Lisp.  Emacs Lisp has many features of
 > Common Lisp, although it is considerably smaller and thus easier to
 > master.
 >=20
 > (This changes the meaning of the sentence too, but it's consistent with=
 =20
 > my understanding of the situation.)
 
 Yes, your version is very good. Thank you ;-)
 
 -Kirill
 
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: bmah 
State-Changed-When: Fri Aug 8 13:38:23 PDT 2003 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed my variation of this text.  Thanks for pointing this 
problem out! 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=55397 
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