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Date: Mon, 7 Oct 2002 13:11:12 -0700 (PDT)
From: Matt Mills <matt_mills@btopenworld.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Grammatical error in en_US.ISO8859-1 handbook (Synopsis section of introduction)
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>Number:         43790
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Grammatical error in en_US.ISO8859-1 handbook (Synopsis section of introduction)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    ceri
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Oct 07 13:20:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Mon Oct 14 12:24:39 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Mon Oct 14 12:24:39 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Matt Mills
>Release:        4.7-RC
>Organization:
n/a
>Environment:
FreeBSD chronic 4.7-RC FreeBSD 4.7-RC #11: Sun Sep 29 15:10:36 BST 2002     alpha@chronic:/usr/src/sys/compile/chronic  i386
>Description:
Taken from a very recent CVSup, the sentence, "The following chapter covers various items about the FreeBSD Project, such as its history, goals, development model, and so on." seems a little incorrect to me.
>How-To-Repeat:
Refer to introduction (Synopsis) section of the handbook.
>Fix:
Perhaps, "The following chapter covers various areas of the FreeBSD Project, such as its history, goals, development model, and so on." would be more suitable.
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->analyzed 
State-Changed-By: ceri 
State-Changed-When: Tue Oct 8 09:27:10 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
This looks good. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->ceri 
Responsible-Changed-By: ceri 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Oct 8 09:27:10 PDT 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll look after this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=43790 
State-Changed-From-To: analyzed->closed 
State-Changed-By: ceri 
State-Changed-When: Mon Oct 14 12:23:55 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
A slightly different version of your suggestion was committed. 
Thanks for your submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=43790 
>Unformatted:
