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From: Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
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Subject: [PATCH] Two fixes for books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
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>Number:         41724
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Two fixes for books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    blackend
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Aug 16 15:40:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Sat Aug 17 08:24:30 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Sat Aug 17 08:24:30 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Christian Brueffer
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de 4.6-STABLE FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE #2: Fri Jun 28 12:47:08 CEST 2002 chris@milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/LORIEN i386


	
>Description:
	- Add a closing parenthesis
	- Fix a closing tag
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	



--- sgml-markup.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml	Wed May 22 16:17:36 2002
+++ chapter.sgml.modified	Tue Aug 13 21:23:20 2002
@@ -1498,7 +1498,7 @@
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>Some of the things the user will be seeing on the screen
 		are prompts from the computer (either from the OS, command
-		shell, or application.  These should be marked up using
+		shell, or application).  These should be marked up using
 		<sgmltag>prompt</sgmltag>.</para>
 
 	      <para>As a special case, the two shell prompts for the normal
@@ -1936,7 +1936,7 @@
 	    
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>With no role attribute (i.e.,
-		<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag>...<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag> the
+		<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag>...<sgmltag>/hostid</sgmltag> the
 		marked up information is the simple hostname, such as
 		<literal>freefall</literal> or <literal>wcarchive</literal>.
 		You can explicitly specify this with
--- sgml-markup.diff ends here ---

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->blackend 
Responsible-Changed-By: blackend 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sat Aug 17 04:17:46 PDT 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=41724 

From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
To: Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/41724: [PATCH] Two fixes for books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
Date: Sat, 17 Aug 2002 13:17:18 +0200

 > @@ -1936,7 +1936,7 @@
 >  	    
 >  	    <listitem>
 >  	      <para>With no role attribute (i.e.,
 > -		<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag>...<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag> the
 > +		<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag>...<sgmltag>/hostid</sgmltag> the
 
 should be <sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag>...<sgmltag>/hostid</sgmltag>)
 a ) is missing too.
 
 >  		marked up information is the simple hostname, such as
 >  		<literal>freefall</literal> or <literal>wcarchive</literal>.
 >  		You can explicitly specify this with
 
 Marc

From: Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
To: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/41724: [PATCH] Two fixes for books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
Date: Sat, 17 Aug 2002 13:32:15 +0000

 On Sat, Aug 17, 2002 at 01:17:18PM +0200, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
 > > @@ -1936,7 +1936,7 @@
 > >  	    
 > >  	    <listitem>
 > >  	      <para>With no role attribute (i.e.,
 > > -		<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag>...<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag> the
 > > +		<sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag>...<sgmltag>/hostid</sgmltag> the
 > 
 > should be <sgmltag>hostid</sgmltag>...<sgmltag>/hostid</sgmltag>)
 > a ) is missing too.
 > 
 > >  		marked up information is the simple hostname, such as
 > >  		<literal>freefall</literal> or <literal>wcarchive</literal>.
 > >  		You can explicitly specify this with
 > 
 > Marc
 > 
 
 Oops, must have overlooked this, nice catch.
 
 - Christian
 
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
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State-Changed-When: Sat Aug 17 08:24:07 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed, thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=41724 
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