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From: Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
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Subject: [PATCH] 4 minor fixes for articles/hubs
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>Number:         41531
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] 4 minor fixes for articles/hubs
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Aug 10 15:20:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Sun Aug 11 02:21:15 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Sun Aug 11 02:21:15 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Christian Brueffer
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de 4.6-STABLE FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE #2: Fri Jun 28 12:47:08 CEST 2002 chris@milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/LORIEN i386


	
>Description:
	4 minor fixes for articles/hubs
	(punctuation, spelling and a spare 'to')
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	

--- hubs.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.orig	Tue Aug  6 00:48:45 2002
+++ article.sgml	Tue Aug  6 01:03:36 2002
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@
         <title>HTTP (required for webpages, optional for FTP fileset)</title>
         <para>
           If you want to offer the FreeBSD webpages, you need
-          to install a webserver a.k.a <application>httpd</application>.
+          to install a webserver a.k.a. <application>httpd</application>.
           You may optionally offer the FTP fileset via HTTP.
           The choice of Webserver software is left up to the mirror administrator.
           Some of the most popular choices are:
@@ -727,8 +727,8 @@
       <para>
         Mirrors are organized by country. All
         official mirrors have a DNS entry of the form
-        <hostid>ftpN.CC.freebsd.org</hostid>. Whith 
-        <emphasis>CC</emphasis> (i.e. country code) beeing the
+        <hostid>ftpN.CC.freebsd.org</hostid>. With 
+        <emphasis>CC</emphasis> (i.e. country code) being the
         <emphasis>top level domain</emphasis>
         of the country, where this mirror is located;
         and <emphasis>N</emphasis> is a number,
@@ -932,7 +932,7 @@
       <para>
         Tier-1 mirrors are required to:
         <itemizedlist>
-          <listitem><para>to carry the complete fileset</para></listitem>
+          <listitem><para>carry the complete fileset</para></listitem>
           <listitem><para>allow access to other mirror sites</para></listitem>
           <listitem><para>provide <application>FTP</application> and 
             <application>RSYNC</application> access</para></listitem>
--- hubs.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Sun Aug 11 02:20:51 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=41531 
>Unformatted:
