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Date: Thu, 8 Aug 2002 07:16:07 -0700 (PDT)
From: Eric Anderson <anderson@centtech.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [PATCH] Missing word in DNS info in Handbook
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>Number:         41449
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Missing word in DNS info in Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    ceri
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Aug 08 07:20:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Tue Aug 26 16:08:33 PDT 2003
>Last-Modified:  Tue Aug 26 16:08:33 PDT 2003
>Originator:     Eric Anderson
>Release:        4.5-REL
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD proton.centtech.com 4.5-RELEASE FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE #0: Mon Jan 28 14:31:56 GMT 2002 
>Description:
      Missing word (I suspect FreeBSD or UNIX) in analogy of DNS root ".".
>How-To-Repeat:
      Go to:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dns.html
and look at section 
17.9.2 Terminology
in the sentence about "root zone".

>Fix:
      Patch attached:

--- chapter.sgml        Thu Aug  8 09:11:10 2002
+++ chapter.sgml-patch  Thu Aug  8 09:04:42 2002
@@ -3831,7 +3831,7 @@
 
              <entry>literally, a <quote>.</quote>, refers to the
                root, or beginning zone.  All zones fall under this, as
-               do all files in FreeBSD fall under the root directory.  It is
+               do all files in fall under the root directory.  It is
                the beginning of the Internet zone hierarchy.</entry>
            </row>
 

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
To: Eric Anderson <anderson@centtech.com>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/41449: [PATCH] Missing word in DNS info in Handbook
Date: Mon, 12 Aug 2002 15:15:47 +0100

 On Thu, Aug 08, 2002 at 07:16:07AM -0700, Eric Anderson said:
 > --- chapter.sgml        Thu Aug  8 09:11:10 2002
 > +++ chapter.sgml-patch  Thu Aug  8 09:04:42 2002
 > @@ -3831,7 +3831,7 @@
 >  
 >               <entry>literally, a <quote>.</quote>, refers to the
 >                 root, or beginning zone.  All zones fall under this, as
 > -               do all files in FreeBSD fall under the root directory.  It is
 > +               do all files in fall under the root directory.  It is
 >                 the beginning of the Internet zone hierarchy.</entry>
 >             </row>
 
 I think that sentence could do with a slightly more thorough slap around the
 park.  I have a truly remarkable fix for this; alas, this buffer is too small
 to contain it (although please feel free to assign the PR to me and I'll deal
 with this when I get some kind of internet access back).
 
 Ceri
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->ceri 
Responsible-Changed-By: ceri 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Sep 30 11:41:42 PDT 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=41449 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: ceri 
State-Changed-When: Tue Aug 26 16:07:18 PDT 2003 
State-Changed-Why:  
I committed a change to this sentence, which makes it clearer. 
I'm in half a mind whether it is worth potentially confusing the 
reader by adding a note that the root zone is not actually ".", but 
rather "", so will leave that for the moment. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=41449 
>Unformatted:
