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From: Munish Chopra <mchopra@engmail.uwaterloo.ca>
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Subject: Minor fixes and updates to multimedia chapter (vchans)
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>Number:         41021
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Minor fixes and updates to multimedia chapter (vchans)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    jim
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jul 26 14:50:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Sat Jul 27 18:52:29 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Sat Jul 27 18:52:29 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Munish Chopra
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD opiate.dnsalias.net 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #7: Sun Jul 21 23:12:09 EDT 2002 munish@CPE0030ab0ef2bb.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com:/usr/src/sys/i386/compile/ARCADIA i386


	
>Description:

    Corrected some horrible grammatical abuse of the English language on my part. Minor updates to make this easier to understand for newcomers.

>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

--- chapter.sgml	Fri Jul 26 17:35:41 2002
+++ multimedia.sgml	Fri Jul 26 17:43:32 2002
@@ -473,9 +473,10 @@
     <screen>&prompt.root; sysctl hw.snd.pcm0.vchans=4
 &prompt.root; sysctl hw.snd.maxautovchans=4</screen>
 
-    <para><literal>hw.snd.pcm0.vchans</literal> is the number of
-      vchans <devicename>pcm0</devicename> has, and is configurable
-      once a device has been attached.
+    <para>The above example allocates four vchans, which is a practical
+      number for everyday use. <literal>hw.snd.pcm0.vchans</literal> is 
+      the number of vchans <devicename>pcm0</devicename> has, and is 
+      configurable once a device has been attached.
       <literal>hw.snd.maxautovchans</literal> is the number of vchans
       a new audio device is given when it is attached using
       &man.kldload.8;.  Since the <devicename>pcm</devicename> module
@@ -486,9 +487,10 @@
 
     <para>If you are not using &man.devfs.5;, you will have to point
       your applications at <devicename>/dev/dsp0</devicename>.x, where
-      'x' is 0 to 3 if <literal>hw.snd.pcm.0.vchans</literal> is set
-      to 4.  On a system using &man.devfs.5, the above will automatically be
-      allocated to the user transparently.</para>
+      'x' is a number between 0 and 3 if <literal>hw.snd.pcm.0.vchans
+      </literal> is set to 4 as in the above example.  On a system using 
+      &man.devfs.5, the above will automatically be allocated transparently 
+      to the user.</para>
    </sect2>
   </sect1>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->jim 
Responsible-Changed-By: jim 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Jul 26 15:03:39 PDT 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=41021 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: jim 
State-Changed-When: Sat Jul 27 18:52:15 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=41021 
>Unformatted:
