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From: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
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Subject: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
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>Number:         40910
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    brueffer
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Jul 22 20:00:02 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Mon Apr 28 10:34:40 CEST 2003
>Last-Modified:  Mon Apr 28 10:34:40 CEST 2003
>Originator:     Chris Pepper
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD guest.reppep.com 4.6-STABLE FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE #6: Mon Jul 15 21:04:43 EDT 2002 root@guest.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386


	
>Description:
	The moused man page has typos & grammar errors.
>How-To-Repeat:
	man moused
	
>Fix:
	Apply this patch.

--- moused.8.diff begins here ---
--- moused.8	Mon Jul  8 22:33:18 2002
+++ moused.8.fixed	Mon Jul  8 22:40:38 2002
@@ -84,8 +84,8 @@
 .Pp
 If the mouse daemon receives the signal
 .Dv SIGHUP ,
-it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
-Useful if
+it reopens the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
+This is useful if
 the mouse is attached/detached while the system is suspended.
 .Pp
 The following options are available:
@@ -239,14 +239,14 @@
 .Nm
 command to automatically select an appropriate protocol for the given
 mouse.
-If you entirely ommit this options in the command line,
+If you entirely omit this options in the command line,
 .Fl t Ar auto
 is assumed.
 Under normal circumstances,
 you need to use this option only if the
 .Nm
 command is not able to detect the protocol automatically
-(see the
+(see
 .Sx "Configuring Mouse Daemon" ) .
 .Pp
 Note that if a protocol type is specified with this option, the
@@ -388,11 +388,11 @@
 always be detected,
 because there appears to be no accepted standard as to how it is encoded.
 .Pp
-Note also that some mice think left is the negative horizontal direction,
+Note also that some mice think left is the negative horizontal direction;
 others may think otherwise.
 Moreover, there are some mice whose two wheels are both mounted vertically,
 and the direction of the second vertical wheel does not match the
-first one's.
+first one.
 .El
 .El
 .Ss Configuring Mouse Daemon
@@ -539,7 +539,7 @@
 .Tn "X\ Window System" )
 to use
 .Xr sysmouse ,
-then the application program will always see mouse data from either mice.
+then the application program will always see mouse data from either mouse.
 When the serial mouse is not attached, the corresponding mouse daemon
 will not detect any movement or button state change and the application
 program will only see mouse data coming from the daemon for the
--- moused.8.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: parv@subdimension.com
To: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/40910: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2002 00:42:38 -0400

 in message <20020723025201.639C7A970@guest.reppep.com>,
 wrote Chris Pepper thusly...
 >
 > >Number:         40910
 > >Category:       docs
 > >Synopsis:       [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
 ...
 > -Note also that some mice think left is the negative horizontal direction,
 > +Note also that some mice think left is the negative horizontal direction;
 >  others may think otherwise.
 
 that semicolon instead of comma seems excessive.
 
 
 -- 
  

From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
To: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/40910: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2002 10:07:20 +0100

 On Mon, Jul 22, 2002 at 10:52:01PM -0400, Chris Pepper said:
 > 	
 > >Description:
 > 	The moused man page has typos & grammar errors.
 
 Hi Chris,
 
 Just two comments on this patch.
 
 >  If the mouse daemon receives the signal
 >  .Dv SIGHUP ,
 > -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
 > -Useful if
 > +it reopens the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
 > +This is useful if
 >  the mouse is attached/detached while the system is suspended.
 
 I'd prefer :
 
  If the mouse daemon receives the signal
  .Dv SIGHUP ,
  -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
  -Useful if
  +it will reopen the mouse port and reinitialize itself.
  +This is useful if
 
 Comments ?
 
 Everything else in this PR looks good to me.
 
 Ceri
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-By: brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Apr 22 11:22:16 CEST 2003 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take care of this 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=40910 
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Sat Apr 26 00:31:23 CEST 2003 
State-Changed-Why:  
Some parts of the patch were already fixed, the rest has been applied. 
Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=40910 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Mon Apr 28 10:34:21 CEST 2003 
State-Changed-Why:  
MFC done. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=40910 
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