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Date: Sat, 29 Jun 2002 18:31:07 -0700 (PDT)
From: Jesper Monsted <jesper@monsted.dk>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Linguistic error in locate(1) man page
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>Number:         40024
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Linguistic error in locate(1) man page
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Jun 29 18:40:02 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Mon Jul 08 14:32:09 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Mon Jul 08 14:32:09 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Jesper Monsted
>Release:        4.6-PRERELEASE
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD chef.bofh 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #4: Sat May  4 01:21:22 CEST 2002     root@chef.bofh:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/MONSTER  i386

>Description:
The line "Usually faster in most cases" is redundant, "Usually" and "in most cases" being basically identical. Should be by removing either of the two.
>How-To-Repeat:
"man locate" under -m :)
>Fix:
Change the text from "This is the default behavior. Usually faster in most cases." to "This is the default behavior and is faster in most cases." or similar.

http://monsted.dk/locate.patch does just that.
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Tue Jul 2 14:13:27 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
I did a reword of the offending sentence, slightly different than your 
suggestions.  I also reworded another line with bad grammar ;)  Thanks 
for pointing this out. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Jul 2 14:13:27 PDT 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I did a reword of the offending sentence, slightly different than your 
suggestions.  I also reworded another line with bad grammar ;)  Thanks 
for pointing this out. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=40024 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 8 14:31:35 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
The change has now been added to -STABLE, thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=40024 
>Unformatted:
