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From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: Minor fixes in problem-reports article
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>Number:         38847
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Minor fixes in problem-reports article
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Jun 03 01:20:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Mon Jun 10 17:49:08 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Mon Jun 10 17:49:08 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386


	
>Description:
Minor fixes in problem-reports article:
-punctuation fixes s/;/,/ 
-addition of application tags and username tags
Reda the patch below for more details.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to articles/problem-reports/article.sgml
	

--- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.org	Mon Jun  3 08:35:10 2002
+++ article.sgml	Mon Jun  3 10:02:02 2002
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@
 <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>send-pr -a /var/run/dmesg -a /tmp/errors</userinput>
 </screen>
 
-      <para>Don't worry about binary files; they will be automatically
+      <para>Don't worry about binary files, they will be automatically
         encoded so as not to upset your mail agent.</para>
 
       <para>If you attach a patch, make sure you use the
@@ -256,10 +256,10 @@
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para><emphasis>Confidential:</emphasis> This is prefilled
-  	    to <literal>no</literal>; changing it makes no sense as
+  	    to <literal>no</literal>, changing it makes no sense as
   	    there is no such thing as a confidential FreeBSD problem
   	    report&mdash;the PR database is distributed worldwide by
-  	    CVSup.</para>
+  	    <application>CVSup</application>.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@
   	    <literal>serious</literal> or
   	    <literal>critical</literal>.  Do not overreact; refrain
   	    from labeling your problem <literal>critical</literal>
-  	    unless it really is (e.g. root exploit, easily
+  	    unless it really is (e.g. <username>root</username> exploit, easily
   	    reproducible panic).  Developers tend to ignore this and
   	    the next field, precisely because problem report
   	    submitters tend to overrate their problems.</para>
--- article.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: bmah 
State-Changed-When: Mon Jun 10 17:48:59 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed...thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38847 
>Unformatted:
