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From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: Minor change in section 2.13.5 of the Handbook
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>Number:         38810
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Minor change in section 2.13.5 of the Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    blackend
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Jun 02 02:40:03 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Mon Jul 21 02:10:47 PDT 2003
>Last-Modified:  Mon Jul 21 02:10:47 PDT 2003
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386


	
>Description:
In section 2.13.5 of the Handbook, we can read "If you want to install
by FTP via a HTTP proxy (see below)," the '(see below)' refers to
nothing, have a look to
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-diff-media.html
for more details.
In fact it's a remain of an old section where that part was used in
descrition of all installation methods.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Sat Jun  1 23:51:11 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Sat Jun  1 23:59:14 2002
@@ -5560,7 +5560,7 @@
 	  you will also need a name server and possibly the address of a
 	  gateway (if you are using PPP, it is your provider's IP address)
 	  to use in talking to it.  If you want to install by FTP via a
-	  HTTP proxy (see below), you will also need the proxy's address.
+	  HTTP proxy, you will also need the proxy's address.
 	  If you do not know the answers to all or most of these questions,
 	  then you should really probably talk to your system administrator
 	  or ISP <emphasis>before</emphasis> trying this type of
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net>
To: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/38810: Minor change in section 2.13.5 of the Handbook
Date: Sun, 9 Jun 2002 13:00:19 +0100

 On Sun, Jun 02, 2002 at 12:07:18AM +0200, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
 
 > In section 2.13.5 of the Handbook, we can read "If you want to install
 > by FTP via a HTTP proxy (see below)," the '(see below)' refers to
 > nothing, have a look to
 > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-diff-media.html
 > for more details.
 > In fact it's a remain of an old section where that part was used in
 > descrition of all installation methods.
 
 The text "(see below)" refers to a note in the install-media section, which
 explains various situations regarding proxy servers.
 
 It may look a bit weird on the website, but does make sense on printed media.
 
 Whether/How we should fix it is hereby thrown open to discussion.
 
 Ceri
 
 -- 
 you can't see when light's so strong
 you can't see when light is gone
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->blackend 
Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Dec 27 10:55:28 PST 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I think the `(see below)' comment should be removed as the handbook is 
reviewed, read, and looked at more on the internet.  It will still be 
understanable on printed media this way and will perhaps save some confusion 
for those reading it online. 

Over to submitter (submitter == blackend) 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38810 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 21 02:10:28 PDT 2003 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38810 
>Unformatted:
