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Subject: Various fixes in recent section 2.9.11 of the Handbook
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>Number:         38669
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Various fixes in recent section 2.9.11 of the Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue May 28 11:50:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jun 23 14:10:08 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jun 23 14:10:08 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386


	
>Description:
Various fixes in recent section 2.9.11 of the Handbook. Read the patch
below for more details.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Tue May 28 20:30:02 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Tue May 28 20:37:26 2002
@@ -3682,15 +3682,15 @@
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 id="x-server">
-      <title>Configure X-Server</title>
+      <title>Configure X Server</title>
 
       <para>In order to use a graphical user interface such as 
 	<application>KDE</application>, <application>GNOME</application>,
 	or others, the X server will need to be configured.</para>
 
       <note>
-	<para>In order to run XFree86 as a non-root user you will need to
-	  install <application>wrapper</application>.  This can be added
+	<para>In order to run XFree86 as a non <username>root</username> user you will need to
+	  install <filename role="package">x11/wrapper</filename>.  This can be added
 	  from the Package Selection menu.</para>
       </note>
 
@@ -3742,7 +3742,7 @@
 	<application>xf86config</application> configuration tool.  The
 	configuration choices you make will depend on the hardware in the
 	system so your choices will probably be different than those
-	shown</para>
+	shown:</para>
 
       <screen>                                Message
  You have configured and been running the mouse daemon. 
@@ -3758,7 +3758,7 @@
 	Press <keycap>Enter</keycap> to continue.</para>
 
       <para>Starting <application>xf86config</application> will display
-	a brief introduction.</para>
+	a brief introduction:</para>
 
       <screen>This program will create a basic XF86Config file, based on menu selections you
 make.
@@ -3965,7 +3965,7 @@
       <para>The selection of a video card driver from a list is
 	next.  If you pass your card on the list, continue to press
 	<keycap>Enter</keycap> and the list will repeat.  Only an
-	excerpt from the list is shown.</para>
+	excerpt from the list is shown:</para>
 
       <screen>Now we must configure video card specific settings. At this point you can
 choose to make a selection out of a database of video card definitions.
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jun 23 14:09:42 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38669 
>Unformatted:
