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Date: Fri, 24 May 2002 15:28:15 -0700 (PDT)
From: Arthur Munn <amunn@comcast.net>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Documentation error in preface of handbook.
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>Number:         38525
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Documentation error in preface of handbook.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri May 24 15:30:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Sat May 25 16:09:40 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Sat May 25 16:09:40 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Arthur Munn
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-RC i386
>Organization:
None
>Environment:
FreeBSD pcp01372333pcs.jamisn01.pa.comcast.net 4.6-RC FreeBSD 4.6-RC #0: Thu May 23 21:37:47 EDT 2002 amunn@pcp01372333.jamisn01.pa.comcast.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC
i386   
>Description:
Early in the preface, the handbook introduction is described as:
 "Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the history of the
  FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model, and everything they've
  done for the FreeBSD project."

As far as I can tell, the introduction of the handbook describes all of those things, except what the FreeBSD Project has done for the FreeBSD Project. So my fix just removes:
 "and everything they've done for the FreeBSD project"
and cleans up the remaining text.

Also, if you are handling this ceri, notice that I was able to get rid of a contraction with this fix as well. :-)
>How-To-Repeat:
     
>Fix:
<   <para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the history of 
<   the FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model, and everything else <   they've done for the FreeBSD project.</para>
---
>   <para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. Describes the history of the 
>   FreeBSD Project. its goals, and development model.</para>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Sat May 25 16:08:26 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
The changes have been committed.  Soon they should appear at the web 
site (within 12 or 24 hours max).  Thank you ;) 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sat May 25 16:08:26 PDT 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38525 
>Unformatted:
