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From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: A typo in section 2.9.14 title, and some punctuation problems
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>Number:         38326
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       A typo in section 2.9.14 title, and some punctuation problems
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon May 20 01:10:03 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Mon May 20 01:13:27 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Mon May 20 01:13:27 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386


	
>Description:
A typo in section 2.9.14 title, and some punctuation problems. Read the
patch below for more details.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Mon May 20 09:54:35 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Mon May 20 09:58:07 2002
@@ -4093,7 +4093,7 @@
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 id="addusers">
-      <title>Add User/Groups</title>
+      <title>Add Users/Groups</title>
 
       <para>You should add at least one user during the installation so
 	that you can use the system without being logged in as
@@ -4137,7 +4137,7 @@
 
       <para>The following descriptions will appear in the lower part of
 	the screen as the items are selected with <keycap>Tab</keycap>
-	to assist with entering the required information.</para>
+	to assist with entering the required information:</para>
 
       <variablelist>
 	<varlistentry>
@@ -4223,7 +4223,7 @@
 	privileges.</para>
 
       <para>When you are satisfied, press &gui.ok; and
-	the User and Group Management menu will redisplay.</para>
+	the User and Group Management menu will redisplay:</para>
 
       <figure id="add-user4">
 	<title>Exit User and Group Management</title>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: dd 
State-Changed-When: Mon May 20 01:12:30 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38326 
>Unformatted:
