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From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and 2.9.13 of the Handbook
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>Number:         38306
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and 2.9.13 of the Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun May 19 14:30:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Mon May 20 01:04:15 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Mon May 20 01:04:15 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386


	
>Description:
Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and
2.9.13 of the Handbook. Read the patch below for more details.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Sun May 19 11:31:25 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Sun May 19 17:51:26 2002
@@ -3931,7 +3931,7 @@
 	  <title>Saving Configuration</title>
 
 	  <para>When you are satisfied, the configuration can now be saved.
-	    Select <guimenuitem>Save the configuration and Exit</guimenuitem>
+	    Select <guimenuitem>Save the configuration and Exit</guimenuitem>.
 	    The configuration file will be saved to 
 	    <filename>/etc/XF86Config</filename>.</para> 
 	</step>
@@ -4026,7 +4026,7 @@
 	keys and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para>
 
       <para>A menu will display showing all the packages available for
-	the selection made.</para>
+	the selection made:</para>
 
       <figure id="package-select">
 	<title>Select Packages</title>
@@ -4040,7 +4040,7 @@
 
       <para>The <application>bash</application> shell is shown selected.
 	Select as many as desired by highlighting the package and pressing
-	the <keycap>Space</keycap>.
+	the <keycap>Space</keycap> key.
 	A short description of each package will appear in the lower left
 	corner of the screen.</para>
 
@@ -4071,7 +4071,7 @@
 
       <para>Use the arrow keys to select <guibutton>[ Install ]</guibutton>
 	and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>.  You will then need to confirm
-	that you want to install the packages.</para>
+	that you want to install the packages:</para>
 
       <figure id="package-install-confirm">
 	<title>Confirm Package Installation</title>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: dd 
State-Changed-When: Mon May 20 01:04:03 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38306 
>Unformatted:
