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From: Chris Pepper <pepper@mail.rockefeller.edu>
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>Number:         38276
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       HTML & text cleanup
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat May 18 22:20:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Thu May 23 19:40:22 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Thu May 23 19:40:22 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Chris Pepper
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD guest.reppep.com 4.5-RELEASE FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE #0: Mon Jan 28 14:31:56 GMT 2002 murray@builder.freebsdmall.com:/usr/src/sys/compile/GENERIC i386


	
>Description:
Add hostid tag to domain name.
Clarify that *sendmail* must be restarted (current wording is ambiguous).
A few more minor clean-ups.
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
SGML diff attached.

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.49
diff -u -r1.49 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	2002/05/12 23:34:30	1.49
+++ chapter.sgml	2002/05/19 05:02:13
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@
       the local host name.  Place any domains or hosts that
       <application>sendmail</application> is to be receiving mail for.
       For example, if this mail server was to accept mail for the
-      domain example.com and the host
+      domain <hostid role="domainname">example.com</hostid> and the host
       <hostid>mail.example.com</hostid>, its
       <filename>local-host-names</filename> might look something like
       this:</para>
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@
 mail.example.com</programlisting>
 
     <para>When this file is updated, &man.sendmail.8; needs to be
-    restarted for it to read the changes.</para>
+    restarted to read the changes.</para>
     
   </sect2>
 
@@ -416,14 +416,14 @@
     <para><application>sendmail</application>'s master configuration
       file, <filename>sendmail.cf</filename> controls the overall
       behavior of <application>sendmail</application>, including everything
-      from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing reject messages for
+      from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing rejection messages to
       remote mail servers.  Naturally, with such a diverse role, this
       configuration file is quite complex and its details are a bit
       out of the scope of this section.  Fortunately, this file rarely
       needs to be changed for standard mail servers.</para>
 
     <para>The master <application>sendmail</application> configuration
-      file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define features
+      file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define the features
       and behavior of sendmail.  Please see
       <filename>/usr/src/contrib/sendmail/cf/README</filename> for
       some of the details.</para>
@@ -436,11 +436,11 @@
   <sect2>
     <title><filename>/etc/mail/virtusertable</filename></title>
 
-    <para>The <filename>virtualusertable</filename> maps mail for 
+    <para>The <filename>virtualusertable</filename> maps mail addresses for 
       virtual domains and
       mailboxes to real mailboxes.  These mailboxes can be local,
-      remote, an alias defined in
-      <filename>/etc/mail/aliases</filename> or a file.</para>
+      remote, aliases defined in
+      <filename>/etc/mail/aliases</filename> or files.</para>
 
     <example>
 	<title>Example Virtual Domain Mail Map</title>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.ORG>
To: Chris Pepper <pepper@mail.rockefeller.edu>
Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/38276: HTML & text cleanup
Date: Tue, 21 May 2002 18:26:10 +0300

 On 2002-05-19 01:12, Chris Pepper wrote:
 > Index: chapter.sgml
 > ===================================================================
 > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v
 > retrieving revision 1.49
 > diff -u -r1.49 chapter.sgml
 > --- chapter.sgml	2002/05/12 23:34:30	1.49
 > +++ chapter.sgml	2002/05/19 05:02:13
 > @@ -397,7 +397,7 @@
 >        the local host name.  Place any domains or hosts that
 >        <application>sendmail</application> is to be receiving mail for.
 >        For example, if this mail server was to accept mail for the
 > -      domain example.com and the host
 > +      domain <hostid role="domainname">example.com</hostid> and the host
 
 Nice :)
 
 >      <para>When this file is updated, &man.sendmail.8; needs to be
 > -    restarted for it to read the changes.</para>
 > +    restarted to read the changes.</para>
 
 OK.
 
 > -      from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing reject messages for
 > +      from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing rejection messages to
 
 OK too.
 
 >      <para>The master <application>sendmail</application> configuration
 > -      file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define features
 > +      file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define the features
 >        and behavior of sendmail.  Please see
 
 Good.
 
 >        <filename>/usr/src/contrib/sendmail/cf/README</filename> for
 >        some of the details.</para>
 > @@ -436,11 +436,11 @@
 >    <sect2>
 >      <title><filename>/etc/mail/virtusertable</filename></title>
 >
 > -    <para>The <filename>virtualusertable</filename> maps mail for
 > +    <para>The <filename>virtualusertable</filename> maps mail addresses for
 >        virtual domains and
 
 Can we make this `virtusertable' in the text of the paragraph too, as
 in the title?
 
 >        mailboxes to real mailboxes.  These mailboxes can be local,
 > -      remote, an alias defined in
 > -      <filename>/etc/mail/aliases</filename> or a file.</para>
 > +      remote, aliases defined in
 > +      <filename>/etc/mail/aliases</filename> or files.</para>
 
 Cool.  Except for the virtusertable, I think this can go in pretty
 much unchanged :)
 
 -- 
 Giorgos Keramidas    - http://www.FreeBSD.org
 keramida@FreeBSD.org - The Power to Serve
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Thu May 23 19:39:42 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
These changes have been already committed as part of PR docs/38318. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu May 23 19:39:42 PDT 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38276 
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