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From: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Unclear sentence on <http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/sendmail.html>
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>Number:         38273
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Unclear sentence on <http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/sendmail.html>
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat May 18 20:40:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Thu May 30 01:34:33 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Thu May 30 01:34:33 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Chris Pepper
>Release:        
>Organization:
Rockefeller University
>Environment:
>Description:
In the sentence "The aliases update matches the mailbox name on the left of the colon, and will expand it to the target(s) on the right.", the word 'update' doesn't make sense -- should be be replaced with 'sendmail' or 'the alias resolver'??
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>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: murray 
State-Changed-When: Thu May 30 01:33:33 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
That sentence was definitely pretty confusing.  I updated it as shown 
below.  It may take up to 24 hours for this change to reach the web 
site.  Thanks for your submission! 

-      <para>The aliases update matches the mailbox name on the left of 
-	the colon, and will expand it to the target(s) on the right.  The 
+      <para>The file format is simple; the mailbox name on the left 
+	side of	the colon is expanded to the target(s) on the right. 
+	The 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38273 
>Unformatted:
