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From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook "X-server" should be "X server"
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>Number:         38240
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook "X-server" should be "X server"
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat May 18 04:40:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jun 23 14:22:24 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jun 23 14:22:24 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386


	
>Description:
In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook we can find many "X-server" or "X
server", only this latter should be used. Read the patch below for more
details.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Sat May 18 13:23:42 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Sat May 18 13:26:44 2002
@@ -3668,7 +3668,7 @@
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 id="x-server">
-      <title>Configure X-Server</title>
+      <title>Configure The X Server</title>
 
       <para>In order to use a graphical user interface such as 
 	<application>KDE</application>, <application>GNOME</application>,
@@ -3830,7 +3830,7 @@
 	  <para>Do not exceed the ratings of your monitor. Damage could
 	    occur. If you have doubts select <guimenuitem>ABORT</guimenuitem>
 	    and get the information. The remainder of the installation process
-	    will be unaffected and configuring the X-Server can be done
+	    will be unaffected and configuring the X server can be done
 	    later using <command>/stand/sysinstall</command>.</para>
 
 	  <para>When finished, move on to the next item.</para>
@@ -3892,7 +3892,7 @@
 
 	  <para>After selecting <guibutton>Okay</guibutton>, some messages
 	    will briefly appear advising to wait and attempting to start
-	    the X-server.  This process takes a few moments, so be
+	    the X server.  This process takes a few moments, so be
 	    patient.</para>
 
 	  <para>The screen will go blank for a short period of time and
@@ -3900,7 +3900,7 @@
 	    <quote>Congratulations, you've got a running server!</quote></para>
 
 	  <para>If nothing appears or the display is distorted, 
-	    kill the X-server using 
+	    kill the X server using 
 	    <keycombo action='simul'>
 	      <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>
 	      <keycap>Alt</keycap>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.ORG>
To: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/38240: In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook "X-server" should be "X server"
Date: Sat, 18 May 2002 16:01:39 +0300

 On 2002-05-18 13:32, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
 > In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook we can find many "X-server" or "X
 > server", only this latter should be used. Read the patch below for
 > more details.
 
 Hello Marc,
 
 Well spotted.  You are right that one of the two (and not both) should
 be used.  I'm more in favor of X&nbsp;server or X-server, since "X
 server" can be wrapper in many funny ways as shown below:
 
 	After you install the X
 	server, ...
 
 What do you think?
 
 - Giorgos
 

From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.ORG>
Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/38240: In section 2.9.11 of the Handbook "X-server" should be "X server"
Date: Sat, 18 May 2002 15:17:07 +0200

 On Sat, May 18, 2002 at 04:01:39PM +0300, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
 > Hello Marc,
 
 Hi Giorgos ;)
 > 
 > Well spotted.  You are right that one of the two (and not both) should
 > be used.  I'm more in favor of X&nbsp;server or X-server, since "X
 > server" can be wrapper in many funny ways as shown below:
 > 
 > 	After you install the X
 > 	server, ...
 > 
 > What do you think?
 
 On www.xfree86.org, they use XFree86 X server
 (http://www.xfree86.org/4.2.0/DESIGN.html for example). So X&nbsp;server
 seems to be the best solution.
 And maybe <title>Configure X-Server</title> should be <title>Configure
 XFree86 X Server</title>; and in the text X&nbsp;server should be used.
 
 cheers,
 Marc
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jun 23 14:21:20 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed by new version of section 2.9.11 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38240 
>Unformatted:
