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From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: Punctuation problems in section 2.5.2 of the Handbook
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>Number:         37767
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Punctuation problems in section 2.5.2 of the Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun May 05 08:30:03 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Thu May 09 13:17:40 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Thu May 09 13:17:40 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gothic.blackend.org 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Fri Apr 19 12:13:41 CEST 2002 marc@gothic.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/GOTHIC i386


	
>Description:
In section 2.5.2 of the Handbook, instead of colons wrong ponctuation
signs are used. Read the following patch and
http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/install-steps.html for more details.

	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml

	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Sun May  5 16:27:49 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Sun May  5 16:29:02 2002
@@ -1530,7 +1530,7 @@
       <para>Call <literal>A</literal> the root filesystem.  If you used the
 	<command>ls</command> command to view the contents of this directory
 	you would see two subdirectories, <literal>A1</literal> and
-	<literal>A2</literal>.  The directory tree looks like this.</para>
+	<literal>A2</literal>.  The directory tree looks like this:</para>
 
       <literallayout class="monospaced"> /
  |
@@ -1542,7 +1542,7 @@
 	filesystem.  So now suppose that you mount filesystem
 	<literal>B</literal> on to the directory <literal>A1</literal>.  The
 	root directory of <literal>B</literal> replaces <literal>A1</literal>,
-	and the directories in <literal>B</literal> appear accordingly.</para>
+	and the directories in <literal>B</literal> appear accordingly:</para>
 
       <literallayout class="monospaced"> /
  | 
@@ -1562,7 +1562,7 @@
 	<firstterm>unmounted</firstterm> from A.</para>
 
       <para>If <literal>B</literal> had been mounted on <literal>A2</literal>
-	then the diagram would look like this;</para>
+	then the diagram would look like this:</para>
 
       <literallayout class="monospaced"> /
  |
@@ -1580,7 +1580,7 @@
       <para>Filesystems can be mounted on top of one another.  Continuing the
 	last example, the <literal>C</literal> filesystem could be mounted on
 	top of the <literal>B1</literal> directory in the <literal>B</literal>
-	filesystem, leading to this arrangement.</para>
+	filesystem, leading to this arrangement:</para>
 
       <literallayout class="monospaced"> /
  |
@@ -1598,7 +1598,7 @@
 
       <para>Or <literal>C</literal> could be mounted directly on to the
 	<literal>A</literal> filesystem, under the <literal>A1</literal>
-	directory.</para>
+	directory:</para>
 
       <literallayout class="monospaced"> /
  |
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Thu May 9 13:17:12 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed!  Thanks alot Marc! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=37767 
>Unformatted:
