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Date: Fri, 3 May 2002 21:59:07 +0200 (CEST)
From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: Punctuation typos in section 2.3 of the Handbook
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>Number:         37722
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Punctuation typos in section 2.3 of the Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri May 03 13:00:02 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Fri May 03 22:32:37 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Fri May 03 22:32:37 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gothic.blackend.org 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Fri Apr 19 12:13:41 CEST 2002 marc@gothic.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/GOTHIC i386


	
>Description:
In section 2.3 of the Handbook, periods are used instead of colons, and
a comma instead of a period. Look below at the patch for more details.

	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/installation/chapter.sgml
	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Fri May  3 21:47:09 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Fri May  3 21:46:35 2002
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@
 
     <important>
       <para>By default, the installation will not make any changes to your
-	disk(s) until you see the following message.</para>
+	disk(s) until you see the following message:</para>
 
       <literallayout class="monospaced">Last Chance: Are you SURE your want continue the installation?
 
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@
 
 	<step>
 	  <para>Irrespective of whether you booted from floppy or CDROM, the
-	    boot process will then get to this point.</para>
+	    boot process will then get to this point:</para>
 
 	  <screen>Hit [Enter] to boot immediately, or any other key for command prompt. 
 Booting [kernel] in 9 seconds... _</screen>
@@ -785,7 +785,7 @@
 
 	<step>
 	  <para>Irrespective of whether you booted from floppy or CDROM, the
-	    boot process will then get to this point.</para>
+	    boot process will then get to this point:</para>
 
 	  <screen>Hit [Enter] to boot immediately, or any other key for command prompt. 
 Booting [kernel] in 9 seconds... _</screen>
@@ -1044,7 +1044,7 @@
 	  
 	  <para>You can now save these changes, and move on to the next step
 	    of the install.  Press <keycap>Q</keycap> to quit the device
-	    configuration interface.  This message will appear.</para>
+	    configuration interface.  This message will appear:</para>
 
 	  <screen>Save these parameters before exiting? ([Y]es/[N]o/[C]ancel)</screen>
 
@@ -1077,7 +1077,7 @@
 	turns on scrolling in the display. You can then use the arrow keys, or
 	<keycap>PageUp</keycap> and <keycap>PageDown</keycap> to view the
 	results.  Press <keycap>Scroll Lock</keycap> again to stop
-	scrolling,</para>
+	scrolling.</para>
 
       <para>Do this now, to review the text that scrolled off the screen when
 	the kernel was carrying out the device probes.  You will see text
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: dd 
State-Changed-When: Fri May 3 22:32:18 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=37722 
>Unformatted:
