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From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: In laptop's article the word PC Card should be used instead of PC-card or PC-Card
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>Number:         37503
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       In laptop's article the word PC Card should be used instead of PC-card or PC-Card
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Apr 27 05:30:05 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Tue May 14 13:59:53 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Tue May 14 13:59:53 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gothic.blackend.org 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Fri Apr 19 12:13:41 CEST 2002 marc@gothic.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/GOTHIC i386


	
>Description:
According to http://www.pcmcia.org/pccardstandard.htm PCMCIA devices are
called PC Card and not PC-card or PC-Card
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	

--- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.org	Sun Apr 14 01:10:30 2002
+++ article.sgml	Sat Apr 27 14:07:57 2002
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
         drivers are normally available (though a few drivers are beginning 
         to show up for other operating systems).  Otherwise, you
         need to buy an external modem: the most compact option is
-        probably a PC-Card (PCMCIA) modem, discussed below, but 
+        probably a PC Card (PCMCIA) modem, discussed below, but 
         serial or USB modems may be cheaper.  Generally, regular 
         modems (non-winmodems) should work fine.  
       </para>
@@ -97,9 +97,9 @@
     </sect1> 
 
     <sect1> 
-      <title>PCMCIA (PC-card) devices</title>
+      <title>PCMCIA (PC Card) devices</title>
 
-      <para> Most laptops come with PCMCIA (also called PC-card)
+      <para> Most laptops come with PCMCIA (also called PC Card)
         slots; these are supported fine under FreeBSD.  Look through
         your boot-up messages (using dmesg) and see whether these were
         detected correctly (they should appear as
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
         through it, and preferably buy cards listed there.  Cards not
         listed may also work as <quote>generic</quote> devices: in particular most
         modems (16-bit) should work fine, provided they are not
-        winmodems (these do exist even as PC-cards, so watch out).  If
+        winmodems (these do exist even as PC Cards, so watch out).  If
         your card is recognised as a generic modem, note that the
         default pccard.conf file specifies a delay time of 10 seconds
         (to avoid freezes on certain modems); this may well be
--- article.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Tue May 14 13:59:04 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Due to a restructure I did, this did not apply.  I have, however, fixed 
all the current instances.  Thanks alot for the submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=37503 
>Unformatted:
