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Date: 28 Mar 2002 19:52:49 -0800
From: "Gary W. Swearingen" <swear@blarg.net>
Reply-To: swear@blarg.net
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: timed(8) manual missing word after "timed, ntp".
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>Number:         36457
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       timed(8) manual missing word after "timed, ntp".
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Mar 28 20:00:05 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:    Fri Apr 12 09:43:27 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Fri Apr 12 09:43:27 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Gary W. Swearingen
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
none
>Environment:
n/a
================
>Description:

The timed(8) manual is garbled in the first sentence of the WARNING:

    If two or more time daemons, whether timed, NTP, try to adjust...

================
>How-To-Repeat:
n/a
================
>Fix:

Change it to:
    If two or more time daemons, whether timed, ntpd(8), or others,
    try to adjust...
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
To: "Gary W. Swearingen" <swear@blarg.net>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/36457: timed(8) manual missing word after "timed, ntp".
Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2002 06:15:56 +0200

 On 2002-03-28 19:52, Gary W. Swearingen wrote:
 > The timed(8) manual is garbled in the first sentence of the WARNING:
 >
 >     If two or more time daemons, whether timed, NTP, try to adjust...
 
 And here's the diff.  I have to go to bed soon, so no commits for me.
 Anyone who wants to make the change, feel free.
 
 >>>
 Index: timed.8
 ===================================================================
 RCS file: /home/ncvs/src/usr.sbin/timed/timed/timed.8,v
 retrieving revision 1.11
 diff -2 -u -r1.11 timed.8
 --- timed.8     15 Jul 2001 08:06:15 -0000      1.11
 +++ timed.8     29 Mar 2002 04:13:19 -0000
 @@ -220,4 +220,5 @@
  .Nm ,
  .Tn NTP ,
 +or others,
  try to adjust the same clock, temporal chaos will result.
  If both
 >>>

From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
To: swear@blarg.net
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/36457: timed(8) manual missing word after "timed, ntp".
Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2002 00:18:18 -0500

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 On 28 Mar 2002 19:52:49 -0800
 "Gary W. Swearingen" <swear@blarg.net> wrote:
 
 
 > >Description:
 > 
 > The timed(8) manual is garbled in the first sentence of the WARNING:
 > 
 >     If two or more time daemons, whether timed, NTP, try to
 >     adjust...
 
 Your right, that does look horrorshow...
 
 -- 
 Tom (Darklogik) Rhodes
 www.FreeBSD.org  -The Power To Serve
 www.Pittgoth.com -Pittgoth Discussion Portal
 trhodes@ {Pittgoth.com, FreeBSD.org}
 
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From: swear@blarg.net (Gary W. Swearingen)
To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/36457: timed(8) manual missing word after "timed, ntp".
Date: 28 Mar 2002 23:24:54 -0800

 Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> writes:
 
 > --- timed.8     15 Jul 2001 08:06:15 -0000      1.11
 > +++ timed.8     29 Mar 2002 04:13:19 -0000
 > @@ -220,4 +220,5 @@
 >  .Nm ,
 >  .Tn NTP ,
        ^^^----- I suggested "ntpd(8)" as a better companion to "timed",
        but I can live with this, as the price of not providing patches.
         (In case this was an oversight, not a choice.)
 > +or others,

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
To: "Gary W. Swearingen" <swear@blarg.net>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/36457: timed(8) manual missing word after "timed, ntp".
Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2002 17:42:32 +0200

 On 2002-03-28 23:24, Gary W. Swearingen wrote:
 > Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> writes:
 > 
 > > --- timed.8     15 Jul 2001 08:06:15 -0000      1.11
 > > +++ timed.8     29 Mar 2002 04:13:19 -0000
 > > @@ -220,4 +220,5 @@
 > >  .Nm ,
 > >  .Tn NTP ,
 >        ^^^----- I suggested "ntpd(8)" as a better companion to "timed",
 >        but I can live with this, as the price of not providing patches.
 >         (In case this was an oversight, not a choice.)
 > > +or others,
 
 Easy to fix.  I'll replace ".Tn NTP" with ".Xr ntpd 8".
 Thanks for pointing this out :)
 
 Giorgos Keramidas                       FreeBSD Documentation Project
 keramida@{freebsd.org,ceid.upatras.gr}  http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/

From: <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/36457: [PATCH] timed(8)
Date: Mon, 1 Apr 2002 19:08:47 -0800 (PST)

 I didn't like the comma ``,'' after ``or others'' as I feel a pause
 would not be necessary here.  Also, this patch replaces NTP with
 ntpd(8) which was the original problem.  Gary, if you like this, then
 I'll get around to committing it for you.
 
 --
 Tom (darklogik) Rhodes
 
 --- timed.8.old	Mon Apr  1 22:04:52 2002
 +++ timed.8	Mon Apr  1 22:07:34 2002
 @@ -218,7 +218,8 @@
  .Sh WARNINGS
  If two or more time daemons, whether
  .Nm ,
 -.Tn NTP ,
 +.Xr ntpd 8 ,
 +or others
  try to adjust the same clock, temporal chaos will result.
  If both
  .Nm
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Apr 3 09:59:14 PST 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Currently, Gary and I are working on a resolution to this PR 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=36457 
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Tue Apr 9 13:47:26 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patch applied to CURRENT and I'll apply to STABLE in 3 days, thanks Gary! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=36457 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Fri Apr 12 09:42:58 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed to STABLE, thanks Gary! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=36457 
>Unformatted:
