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Subject: [PATCH:] correcting three (3) typos in the fdp-primer
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>Number:         36334
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH:] correcting three (3) typos in the fdp-primer
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Mar 26 04:00:06 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:    Tue Mar 26 14:32:49 PST 2002
>Last-Modified:  Tue Mar 26 14:32:49 PST 2002
>Originator:     Martin Karlsson
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE-p2 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD foo31-146.visit.se 4.5-RELEASE-p2 FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE-p2 #0: Fri Mar 22 13:00:27 CET 2002 root@foo31-146.visit.se:/usr/src/sys/compile/BERTIL i386


	
>Description:
	I have found three typos in the files that make up the fdp-primer:
	Errorneous (Erroneous)
	reorganistion (reorganisation)
	wil (will)

	This patch (hopefully ;)) corrects this.

	Be well
	-- 
	Martin Karlsson


>How-To-Repeat:
	Read the fdp-primer.
>Fix:

	Apply the following (-ru) patch.

--- diff.fdp-primer begins here ---
diff -ru fdp-primer.old/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml
--- fdp-primer.old/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml	Tue Mar 26 12:14:08 2002
+++ fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml	Tue Mar 26 12:28:28 2002
@@ -861,7 +861,7 @@
       will reject documents that make that error.</para>
 
     <example>
-      <title>Errorneous SGML comments</title>
+      <title>Erroneous SGML comments</title>
 
       <programlisting><![ CDATA [
 <!-- This is in the comment --
diff -ru fdp-primer.old/structure/chapter.sgml fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml
--- fdp-primer.old/structure/chapter.sgml	Tue Mar 26 12:14:08 2002
+++ fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml	Tue Mar 26 12:29:33 2002
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
 	    <para>Chapters and/or directories should not be named in a fashion
 	      that reflects their ordering within the Handbook.  This ordering
 	      might change as the content within the Handbook is reorganised;
-	      this sort of reorganistion should not (generally) include the
+	      this sort of reorganisation should not (generally) include the
 	      need to rename files (unless entire chapters are being promoted
 	      or demoted within the hierarchy).</para>
 	  </important>
diff -ru fdp-primer.old/the-website/chapter.sgml fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml
--- fdp-primer.old/the-website/chapter.sgml	Tue Mar 26 12:14:07 2002
+++ fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml	Tue Mar 26 12:37:29 2002
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
 	<term><makevar>WEB_ONLY</makevar></term>
 	
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>If set and not empty, the makefiles wil build and install
+	  <para>If set and not empty, the makefiles will build and install
 	    only the HTML pages from the www directory. All documents from
 	    the doc directory (Handbook, FAQ, Tutorials) will be ignored.
 	    E.g.:</para>
--- diff.fdp-primer ends here ---

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Tue Mar 26 14:32:09 PST 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed!  Thanks for reporting this :) 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Mar 26 14:32:09 PST 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=36334 
>Unformatted:
