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From: Martin Karlsson <martin.karlsson@visit.se>
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Subject: [PATCH] Examples A-3, A-4, and A-5 in A.3.1 of the fdp-primer are mistyped
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>Number:         36100
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Examples A-3, A-4, and A-5 in A.3.1 of the fdp-primer are mistyped
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Mar 19 06:10:02 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:    Sat Mar 23 19:43:46 PST 2002
>Last-Modified:  Sat Mar 23 19:43:46 PST 2002
>Originator:     Martin Karlsson
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE-p2 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD foo31-146.visit.se 4.5-RELEASE-p2 FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE-p2 #0: Tue Mar 19 06:22:33 CET 2002 root@foo31-146.visit.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ADAM i386


	
>Description:
	Examples A-3, A-4, and A-5 in section A.3.1 of the FDP-primer show how to convert 
	DocBook to HTML (one file and several files, respectively).
	The penultimate line of each example (the same in all cases) should end with a backslash,
	to allow continuation on the next line ,but does not.

	This patch inserts a backslash at the correct position in all three examples.
	The file in question is /doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/examples/book.sgml.

	NOTE: I am _not_ 100% sure about this, but without the backslash, this does not work for me,
	and with the backslash it does.

	Regards,
	-- 
	Martin Karlsson
>How-To-Repeat:
	Read section A.3.1 (Appendix A) of the FDP-primer.
>Fix:

	 
*** 2appendix.sgml	Tue Mar 19 15:04:14 2002
--- appendix.sgml	Tue Mar 19 14:39:20 2002
***************
*** 170,176 ****
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-1-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
!     -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/html/docbook.dsl \<co id="examples-co-jade-1-dsssl">
      -t sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-1-transform"> file.sgml > file.html <co id="examples-co-jade-1-filename"></userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>
--- 170,176 ----
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-1-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
!     -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/html/docbook.dsl <co id="examples-co-jade-1-dsssl">
      -t sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-1-transform"> file.sgml > file.html <co id="examples-co-jade-1-filename"></userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>
***************
*** 214,220 ****
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-2-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
!     -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/html/docbook.dsl \<co id="examples-co-jade-2-dsssl">
      -t sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-2-transform"> <replaceable>file</replaceable>.sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-2-filename"></userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>
--- 214,220 ----
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-2-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
!     -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/html/docbook.dsl <co id="examples-co-jade-2-dsssl">
      -t sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-2-transform"> <replaceable>file</replaceable>.sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-2-filename"></userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>
***************
*** 260,266 ****
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-3-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
!     -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/print/docbook.dsl \<co id="examples-co-jade-3-dsssl">
      -t tex <co id="examples-co-jade-3-tex"> <replaceable>file</replaceable>.sgml</userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>
--- 260,266 ----
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-3-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
!     -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/print/docbook.dsl <co id="examples-co-jade-3-dsssl">
      -t tex <co id="examples-co-jade-3-tex"> <replaceable>file</replaceable>.sgml</userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Martin Karlsson <martin.karlsson@visit.se>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/36100: [PATCH] Examples A-3, A-4, and A-5 in A.3.1 of the fdp-primer are mistyped
Date: Tue, 19 Mar 2002 18:35:42 +0100

 * Martin Karlsson <martin.karlsson@visit.se> [2002-03-19 15.07 +0100]:
 
 Forget my first attempt, please. This should be alright.
 
 -- 
 Martin, the mistake-man from scandinavia
 
 -----------8<-------------8<--------------------8<--------------------------------------------
 
 Fix:
 
 --- appendix.old	Tue Mar 19 14:39:20 2002
 +++ appendix.new	Tue Mar 19 15:04:14 2002
 @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-1-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
 -    -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/html/docbook.dsl <co id="examples-co-jade-1-dsssl">
 +    -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/html/docbook.dsl \<co id="examples-co-jade-1-dsssl">
      -t sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-1-transform"> file.sgml > file.html <co id="examples-co-jade-1-filename"></userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>
 @@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-2-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
 -    -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/html/docbook.dsl <co id="examples-co-jade-2-dsssl">
 +    -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/html/docbook.dsl \<co id="examples-co-jade-2-dsssl">
      -t sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-2-transform"> <replaceable>file</replaceable>.sgml <co id="examples-co-jade-2-filename"></userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>
 @@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/catalog \ <co id="examples-co-jade-3-catalog">
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/catalog \
      -c /usr/local/share/sgml/jade/catalog \
 -    -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/print/docbook.dsl <co id="examples-co-jade-3-dsssl">
 +    -d /usr/local/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl/modular/print/docbook.dsl \<co id="examples-co-jade-3-dsssl">
      -t tex <co id="examples-co-jade-3-tex"> <replaceable>file</replaceable>.sgml</userinput></screen>
  
  	<calloutlist>
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Sat Mar 23 19:41:06 PST 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed in revision 1.9 of file 
doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/examples/appendix.sgml 

Thanks :)))  If it isn't too much trouble, 
could you use 'diff -u' for changes to the docs next time? 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sat Mar 23 19:41:06 PST 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=36100 
>Unformatted:
