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Date: 08 Mar 2002 14:13:30 -0800
From: "Gary W. Swearingen" <swear@blarg.net>
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To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: fdisk(8) page extraneous "being", etc.
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>Number:         35688
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       fdisk(8) page extraneous "being", etc.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Mar 08 14:10:01 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:    Thu Apr 25 09:30:02 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Thu Apr 25 09:30:02 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Gary W. Swearingen
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
none
>Environment:
n/a
================
>Description:
The man page has several minor problems. See below.
================
>How-To-Repeat:
n/a
================
>Fix:

-- Change:
    If omitted, the disks 'ad0', and 'da0' are being searched in that
    order, until one is being found responding.
   To:
    If omitted, the disks 'ad0' and 'da0' are searched in that
    order until one responds.

-- Change "program fdisk" to "fdisk program" or "program, fdisk,".

-- Change "purposes" to "purposes.".

-- Change "designed not to" to "designed to not".

-- Change "FreeBSD; and" to "FreeBSD and".

-- For -I, change "with one" to "for one".

-- Change "setup" to "set up" (it's not used as a noun here).

-- Change all "partition" to "slice", except in the sample output.
    FreeBSD should either use "slice" everywhere or conform to the
    more common usage, eg, "primary partition" everywhere and stop
    using "slice".

   From "Bugs", remove:
    Throughout this man page, the term 'partition' is used where it
    should actually be 'slice', in order to conform with the terms used
    elsewhere.
    

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Apr 11 12:48:32 PDT 2002 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I shall handle this one also, thanks for pointing this out Gary. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=35688 
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Thu Apr 18 09:25:31 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patched in CURRENT waiting for MFC. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=35688 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Thu Apr 25 09:29:34 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed to -stable.  Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=35688 
>Unformatted:
