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From: Priit Piipuu <priit@bsd.ee>
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Subject: [PATCH] Misc corrections to the Handbook, chapter 2
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>Number:         35155
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Misc corrections to the Handbook, chapter 2
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Feb 20 11:40:01 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:    Fri Mar 1 22:50:37 PST 2002
>Last-Modified:  Fri Mar 01 22:51:38 PST 2002
>Originator:     Priit Piipuu
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-RC i386
>Organization:
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System: FreeBSD minerva 4.5-RC FreeBSD 4.5-RC #2: Fri Jan 18 20:57:36 EET 2002 priitp@minerva:/usr/src/sys/compile/tuum i386


	
>Description:
        Add missing quote tags, port number change (in next paragraph, 
	different number will be used) etc.
>How-To-Repeat:
        Read the source ;-)
>Fix:

	

--- diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.old	Wed Feb 20 20:59:44 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Wed Feb 20 20:40:32 2002
@@ -994,7 +994,7 @@
 	<step>
 	  <para>If there are no conflicts listed then you can skip this step.
 	    Otherwise, the remaining conflicts need to be examined.  If they
-	    do not have the indication of an "allowed conflict" in the message
+	    do not have the indication of an <quote>allowed conflict</quote> in the message
 	    area, then either the IRQ/address for device probe will need to be
 	    changed, <emphasis>or</emphasis> the IRQ/address on the hardware
 	    will need to be changed.</para>
@@ -2705,7 +2705,7 @@
 	the real server.  For example, assuming you want to install from
 	<hostid role="fqdn">ftp.FreeBSD.org</hostid>, using the proxy FTP
 	server <hostid role="fqdn">foo.example.com</hostid>, listening on port
-	1024.</para>
+	1234.</para>
       
       <para>In this case, you go to the options menu, set the FTP username
 	to <literal>ftp@ftp.FreeBSD.org</literal>, and the password to your
@@ -2958,7 +2958,7 @@
 
       <para>Choosing <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton> and pressing
 	<keycap>Enter</keycap> will bring
-	the machine up on the network and be ready for use after leaving
+	the machine up on the network and be ready for use after 
 	leaving the installation.</para>
     </sect2>
 
@@ -4217,7 +4217,7 @@
 	use a shell that does not exist or you will not be able to
 	login.</para>
 
-      <para>The user was also added to the group "wheel" to be able to
+      <para>The user was also added to the group <quote>wheel</quote> to be able to
 	become a superuser with root privileges.</para>
 
       <para>When you are satisfied, press &gui.ok; and
@@ -4514,7 +4514,7 @@
 Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
 
       <para>It is safe to turn off the power after the shutdown command
-	has been issued and the message "Please press any key to reboot"
+	has been issued and the message <quote>Please press any key to reboot</quote>
 	appears. If any key is pressed instead of turning off the power
 	switch, the system will reboot.</para>
 
@@ -4821,7 +4821,7 @@
         <secondary>headless (serial console)</secondary>
       </indexterm>
       <indexterm><primary>serial console</primary></indexterm>
-      <para>This type of installation is called a "headless install",
+      <para>This type of installation is called a <quote>headless install</quote>,
         because the machine that you are trying to install FreeBSD on
         either does not have a monitor attached to it, or does not even
         have a VGA output. How is this possible you ask? Using a
@@ -4928,9 +4928,9 @@
 
 	    <para>Here is where you must set the floppy to boot into a
 	      serial console. You have to make a file called
-	      <filename>boot.config</filename> containing "/boot/loader
-	      -h".  All this does is pass a flag to the bootloader to
-	      boot into a serial console.</para>
+	      <filename>boot.config</filename> containing 
+	      <quote>/boot/loader -h</quote>.  All this does is pass a flag to 
+	      the bootloader to boot into a serial console.</para>
 
 	    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "/boot/loader -h" > boot.config</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -5002,7 +5002,7 @@
       FreeBSD installation media and/or source.  This might be physical media,
       such as a tape, or a source that <application>Sysinstall</application>
       can use to retrieve the files, such as a local FTP site, or an MS-DOS
-      partition.  For example;</para>
+      partition.  For example:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
--- diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
To: Priit Piipuu <priit@bsd.ee>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/35155: [PATCH] Misc corrections to the Handbook, chapter 2
Date: Wed, 20 Feb 2002 14:50:11 -0500

 Priit,
 
 Thanks for the patch.  You're mixing some whitespace changes with
 content changes, however, to wit:
 
 >  	    <para>Here is where you must set the floppy to boot into a
 >  	      serial console. You have to make a file called
 > -	      <filename>boot.config</filename> containing "/boot/loader
 > -	      -h".  All this does is pass a flag to the bootloader to
 > -	      boot into a serial console.</para>
 > +	      <filename>boot.config</filename> containing 
 > +	      <quote>/boot/loader -h</quote>.  All this does is pass a flag to 
 > +	      the bootloader to boot into a serial console.</para>
 >  
 
 The last line here is a gratuitous whitespace diff.
 
 We'd appreciate a correction.  Thanks for your efforts!
 
 ==ml
 
 -- 
 Michael Lucas		mwlucas@FreeBSD.org, mwlucas@BlackHelicopters.org
 my FreeBSD column: http://www.oreillynet.com/pub/q/Big_Scary_Daemons
 
 http://www.blackhelicopters.org/~mwlucas/

From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/35155: [PATCH] Misc corrections to the Handbook, chapter 2
Date: Tue, 26 Feb 2002 16:43:10 -0500 (EST)

 diff -ru handbook.old/install/chapter.sgml handbook/install/chapter.sgml
 --- handbook.old/install/chapter.sgml	Tue Feb 26 16:27:25 2002
 +++ handbook/install/chapter.sgml	Tue Feb 26 16:39:16 2002
 @@ -994,7 +994,7 @@
  	<step>
  	  <para>If there are no conflicts listed then you can skip this step.
  	    Otherwise, the remaining conflicts need to be examined.  If they
 -	    do not have the indication of an "allowed conflict" in the message
 +	    do not have the indication of an <quote>allowed conflict</quote> in the message
  	    area, then either the IRQ/address for device probe will need to be
  	    changed, <emphasis>or</emphasis> the IRQ/address on the hardware
  	    will need to be changed.</para>
 @@ -2705,7 +2705,7 @@
  	the real server.  For example, assuming you want to install from
  	<hostid role="fqdn">ftp.FreeBSD.org</hostid>, using the proxy FTP
  	server <hostid role="fqdn">foo.example.com</hostid>, listening on port
 -	1024.</para>
 +	1034.</para>
        
        <para>In this case, you go to the options menu, set the FTP username
  	to <literal>ftp@ftp.FreeBSD.org</literal>, and the password to your
 @@ -2958,7 +2958,7 @@
  
        <para>Choosing <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton> and pressing
  	<keycap>Enter</keycap> will bring
 -	the machine up on the network and be ready for use after leaving
 +	the machine up on the network and be ready for use after
  	leaving the installation.</para>
      </sect2>
  
 @@ -4217,7 +4217,7 @@
  	use a shell that does not exist or you will not be able to
  	login.</para>
  
 -      <para>The user was also added to the group "wheel" to be able to
 +      <para>The user was also added to the group <quote>wheel</quote> to be able to
  	become a superuser with root privileges.</para>
  
        <para>When you are satisfied, press &gui.ok; and
 @@ -4514,7 +4514,7 @@
  Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
  
        <para>It is safe to turn off the power after the shutdown command
 -	has been issued and the message "Please press any key to reboot"
 +	has been issued and the message <quote>Please press any key to reboot</quote>
  	appears. If any key is pressed instead of turning off the power
  	switch, the system will reboot.</para>
  
 @@ -4821,7 +4821,7 @@
          <secondary>headless (serial console)</secondary>
        </indexterm>
        <indexterm><primary>serial console</primary></indexterm>
 -      <para>This type of installation is called a "headless install",
 +      <para>This type of installation is called a <quote>headless install</quote>,
          because the machine that you are trying to install FreeBSD on
          either does not have a monitor attached to it, or does not even
          have a VGA output. How is this possible you ask? Using a
 @@ -4928,8 +4928,8 @@
  
  	    <para>Here is where you must set the floppy to boot into a
  	      serial console. You have to make a file called
 -	      <filename>boot.config</filename> containing "/boot/loader
 -	      -h".  All this does is pass a flag to the bootloader to
 +	      <filename>boot.config</filename> containing <quote>/boot/loader
 +	      -h</quote>.  All this does is pass a flag to the bootloader to
  	      boot into a serial console.</para>
  
  	    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "/boot/loader -h" > boot.config</userinput></screen>
 @@ -5002,7 +5002,7 @@
        FreeBSD installation media and/or source.  This might be physical media,
        such as a tape, or a source that <application>Sysinstall</application>
        can use to retrieve the files, such as a local FTP site, or an MS-DOS
 -      partition.  For example;</para>
 +      partition.  For example:</para>
  
      <itemizedlist>
        <listitem>

From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/35155: [PATCH] Misc corrections to the Handbook, chapter 2
Date: Tue, 26 Feb 2002 16:53:46 -0500

 New patch on its way...
 
 Sorry for being slightly impatient.
 
 -- 
 Tom (Darklogik) Rhodes
 www.Pittgoth.com Gothic Liberation Front
 www.FreeBSD.org  The Power To Serve
 

From: Priit Piipuu <priit@bsd.ee>
To: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/35155: [PATCH] Misc corrections to the Handbook, chapter 2
Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2002 00:16:53 +0200

 New, hopefully better patch.
 
 
 --- chapter.sgml.old	Wed Feb 20 20:59:44 2002
 +++ chapter.sgml	Fri Feb 22 01:36:49 2002
 @@ -994,7 +994,7 @@
  	<step>
  	  <para>If there are no conflicts listed then you can skip this step.
  	    Otherwise, the remaining conflicts need to be examined.  If they
 -	    do not have the indication of an "allowed conflict" in the message
 +	    do not have the indication of an <quote>allowed conflict</quote> in the message
  	    area, then either the IRQ/address for device probe will need to be
  	    changed, <emphasis>or</emphasis> the IRQ/address on the hardware
  	    will need to be changed.</para>
 @@ -4217,7 +4217,7 @@
  	use a shell that does not exist or you will not be able to
  	login.</para>
  
 -      <para>The user was also added to the group "wheel" to be able to
 +      <para>The user was also added to the group <quote>wheel</quote> to be able to
  	become a superuser with root privileges.</para>
  
        <para>When you are satisfied, press &gui.ok; and
 @@ -4514,7 +4514,7 @@
  Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
  
        <para>It is safe to turn off the power after the shutdown command
 -	has been issued and the message "Please press any key to reboot"
 +	has been issued and the message <quote>Please press any key to reboot</quote>
  	appears. If any key is pressed instead of turning off the power
  	switch, the system will reboot.</para>
  
 @@ -4821,7 +4821,7 @@
          <secondary>headless (serial console)</secondary>
        </indexterm>
        <indexterm><primary>serial console</primary></indexterm>
 -      <para>This type of installation is called a "headless install",
 +      <para>This type of installation is called a <quote>headless install</quote>,
          because the machine that you are trying to install FreeBSD on
          either does not have a monitor attached to it, or does not even
          have a VGA output. How is this possible you ask? Using a
 @@ -4928,8 +4928,8 @@
  
  	    <para>Here is where you must set the floppy to boot into a
  	      serial console. You have to make a file called
 -	      <filename>boot.config</filename> containing "/boot/loader
 -	      -h".  All this does is pass a flag to the bootloader to
 +	      <filename>boot.config</filename> containing 
 +	      <quote>/boot/loader -h</quote>.  All this does is pass a flag to the bootloader to
  	      boot into a serial console.</para>
  
  	    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "/boot/loader -h" > boot.config</userinput></screen>
 @@ -5002,7 +5002,7 @@
        FreeBSD installation media and/or source.  This might be physical media,
        such as a tape, or a source that <application>Sysinstall</application>
        can use to retrieve the files, such as a local FTP site, or an MS-DOS
 -      partition.  For example;</para>
 +      partition.  For example:</para>
  
      <itemizedlist>
        <listitem>
 
 -- 
 For 20 dollars, I'll give you a good fortune next time ...
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: bmah 
State-Changed-When: Fri Mar 1 22:50:37 PST 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed with a couple of modifications (I substituted more appropriate 
tags in two places where you used <quote></quote>)...see chapter.sgml 
1.141->1.142 for the details.  Thanks! 

http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=35155 
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