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Subject: Developers' handbook, cont. : l10n chapter
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>Number:         34966
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Developers' handbook, cont. : l10n chapter
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Feb 15 07:30:00 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:    Tue Feb 19 06:26:40 PST 2002
>Last-Modified:  Tue Feb 19 06:27:22 PST 2002
>Originator:     Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Tue Feb 12 17:56:57 GMT 2002 setantae@rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/RHADAMANTH i386


	
>Description:

- Change chapter title, since Localization != I18N
- Minor grammar fixes

Ceri

>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml.old	Fri Feb 15 15:06:30 2002
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml	Fri Feb 15 15:11:31 2002
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 -->
 
   <chapter id="l10n">
-    <title>Localization - I18N</title>
+    <title>Localization and Internationalization - L10N and I18N</title>
 
     <sect1>
       <title>Programming I18N Compliant Applications</title>
@@ -13,16 +13,16 @@
       <indexterm><primary>GTK</primary></indexterm>
       <para>To make your application more useful for speakers of other
 	languages, we hope that you will program I18N compliant.  The GNU
-	gcc compiler, GUI Libraries like QT and GTK support I18N through
+	gcc compiler and GUI libraries like QT and GTK support I18N through
 	special handling of strings.  Making a program I18N compliant is
 	very easy.  It allows contributors to port your application to
-	other languages quickly.  Refer to library specific I18N
+	other languages quickly.  Refer to the library specific I18N
 	documentation for more details.</para>
 
-      <para>To the contrary of common perception, I18N compliant code is
+      <para>In contrast with common perception, I18N compliant code is
 	easy to write.  Usually, it only involves wrapping your strings
 	with library specific functions.  In addition, please be sure to
-	allow for wide or multibyte characters support.</para>
+	allow for wide or multibyte character support.</para>
 
       <sect2>
 	<title>A Call to Unify the I18N Effort</title>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 
 	<para>Currently, we hope that, when you write or port I18N
 	  programs, you would send it out to each country's related
-	  FreeBSD mailing lists for testing.  In the future, we hope to
+	  FreeBSD mailing list for testing.  In the future, we hope to
 	  create applications that work in all the languages
 	  out-of-the-box without dirty hacks.</para>
 
@@ -62,12 +62,12 @@
           <primary>Python</primary>
         </indexterm>
 
-	<para>Perl and Python have I18N and wide characters handling
+	<para>Perl and Python have I18N and wide character handling
 	  libraries.  Please use them for I18N compliance.</para>
 
 	<para>In older FreeBSD versions,
-	  Perl may gives warning about not having a wide characters locale
-	  that is already installed in your system.  You can set the
+	  Perl may give warnings about not having a wide character locale
+	  installed on your system.  You can set the
 	  environmental variable <envar>LD_PRELOAD</envar> to
 	  <filename>/usr/lib/libxpg4.so</filename> in your shell.</para>
 
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: murray 
State-Changed-When: Tue Feb 19 06:26:40 PST 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Thanks for the patch.  I also changed 'environmental variables' -> 
'environment variables' while I was here.  This is applied in r1.4 of 
chapter.sgml. 


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