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From: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
Reply-To: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
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Subject: [PATCH] cosmetic for Floppy section
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>Number:         34509
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] cosmetic for Floppy section
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jan 31 16:00:02 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:    Fri Feb 1 01:42:36 PST 2002
>Last-Modified:  Fri Feb 01 01:42:51 PST 2002
>Originator:     Martin Heinen
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD Moses.earth.sol 4.4-STABLE FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE #0: Sat Dec 22 07:35:30 CET 2001 toor@Moses.earth.sol:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/MOSES i386


	
>Description:
	throught -> through
	put variable parts inside <replaceable>
>How-To-Repeat:
	read the section 'Floppy disks' in the handbook
>Fix:

Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.78
diff -u -r1.78 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	31 Jan 2002 08:10:08 -0000	1.78
+++ chapter.sgml	31 Jan 2002 23:36:03 -0000
@@ -2022,17 +2022,17 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>The device</title>
 
-      <para>Floppy disks are accessed throught entries in
+      <para>Floppy disks are accessed through entries in
         <filename>/dev</filename> (like any other device). To access the
-        raw floppy disk you can use <filename>/dev/rfdX</filename>,
-        where X stands for the drive number, usually 0. When the disk is
-        formatted you can use <filename>/dev/fdX</filename>, or
+        raw floppy disk you can use <filename>/dev/rfd<replaceable>X</replaceable></filename>,
+        where <replaceable>X</replaceable> stands for the drive number, usually 0. When the disk is
+        formatted you can use <filename>/dev/fd<replaceable>X</replaceable></filename>, or
         whichever of the other devices named
-        <filename>/dev/fdXY</filename>, where Y stands for a
+        <filename>/dev/fd<replaceable>XY</replaceable></filename>, where <replaceable>Y</replaceable> stands for a
         letter. These are all the same.</para>
 
       <para>Other important devices are
-        <filename>/dev/fdX.size</filename>, where size is a floppy disk
+        <filename>/dev/fd<replaceable>X</replaceable>.<replaceable>size</replaceable></filename>, where <replaceable>size</replaceable> is a floppy disk
         size in kilobytes. These entries are used at low-level format
         time to determine the disk size.</para>
 
@@ -2053,7 +2053,7 @@
       <para>To format the floppy at a low-level fashion you need to
         use <application>fdformat</application>. This utility expects
         the device name as an argument. We will use those
-        <filename>/dev/fdX.size</filename> devices, which will allow us
+        <filename>/dev/fd<replaceable>X</replaceable>.<replaceable>size</replaceable></filename> devices, which will allow us
         to format the floppy to its real size, or force them.  So you
         insert a new 3.5inch floppy disk in your drive and issue:</para>
 
@@ -2092,9 +2092,9 @@
       <para>You can run now <application>disklabel</application>
         like:</para>
 
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>/sbin/disklabel -B -r -w /dev/rfd0 fd(size)</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>/sbin/disklabel -B -r -w /dev/rfd0 <replaceable>fdsize</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>Replace fd(size) with fd1440, fd1720 or whichever size you
+      <para>Replace <replaceable>fdsize</replaceable> with <literal>fd1440</literal>, <literal>fd1720</literal> or whichever size you
         want.  The last field instructs disklabel which entry to take
         from <filename>/etc/disktab</filename> to use.</para>
     </sect2>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
To: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/34509: [PATCH] cosmetic for Floppy section
Date: Thu, 31 Jan 2002 19:23:17 -0500

 Martin Heinen wrote:
 
 
 Was this the section I recent moved into the handbook, if so i'm very 
 sorry that I didn't catch these at first, mainly since Murray said on 
 the pr that it looked good, I thought nothing needed working on :)
 
 --Tom Rhodes
 
 
 
 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: jim 
State-Changed-When: Fri Feb 1 01:42:36 PST 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=34509 
>Unformatted:
