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From: Giorgos Keramidas <charon@labs.gr>
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Subject: a few whitespace corrections for articles/pxe
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>Number:         30900
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       a few whitespace corrections for articles/pxe
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Sep 28 17:10:00 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:    Sat Sep 29 01:48:48 PDT 2001
>Last-Modified:  Sat Sep 29 01:48:59 PDT 2001
>Originator:     Giorgos Keramidas
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #5: Tue Sep 4
  19:49:44 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386

>Description:

	The attached patch removes whitespace that is not really necessary
	from english version of articles/pxe.  Especially the first chunk of
	the patch that corrects a parenthesis that is not separated from the
	previous word seems to be nice.

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- patch-ab begins here ---
Index: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pxe/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pxe/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.5 article.sgml
--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pxe/article.sgml	12 Aug 2001 23:31:08 -0000	1.5
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pxe/article.sgml	28 Sep 2001 22:50:38 -0000
@@ -171,13 +171,13 @@
       </step>
       
       <step>
-        <para>Compile a custom kernel for the clients(particularly to avoid 
+        <para>Compile a custom kernel for the clients (particularly to avoid 
           the device config screen at boot) and stick it in 
           <filename>/usr/tftpboot</filename>.</para>
       </step>
       
       <step>
-        <para> Make a special <filename>loader.rc</filename> to and install it 
+        <para>Make a special <filename>loader.rc</filename> to and install it 
           in <filename>/usr/tftpboot/boot/loader.rc</filename> so that it 
           doesn't prompt for the second disk, here's 
           <ulink url="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~alfred/pxe/loader.rc">
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
       </step>
       
       <step>
-        <para> Extract the installer and helper utilities from the mfsroot disk
+        <para>Extract the installer and helper utilities from the mfsroot disk
           and uncompress them, put them in <filename>/usr/tftpboot</filename>
           as well:</para>
 
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
       </step>
       
       <step>
-        <para> Copy the compressed packages into the packages/All directory 
+        <para>Copy the compressed packages into the packages/All directory 
           under <filename>nfs</filename>.</para>
       </step>
       
--- patch-ab ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: murray 
State-Changed-When: Sat Sep 29 01:48:48 PDT 2001 
State-Changed-Why:  
Your fix has been committed, thanks! 


http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=30900 
>Unformatted:
