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From: Giorgos Keramidas <charon@labs.gr>
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Subject: make a sentence out of an unfinished one in articles/explaining-freebsd
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>Number:         30774
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       make a sentence out of an unfinished one in articles/explaining-bsd
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Sep 23 15:10:00 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:    Sun Sep 23 19:38:11 PDT 2001
>Last-Modified:  Sun Sep 23 19:38:28 PDT 2001
>Originator:     Giorgos Keramidas
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #5: Tue Sep 4
  19:49:44 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386

>Description:

	There's a dangling <emphasis>Core team</emphasis> before the beginning
	of a sentence in articles/explaining-bsd.  The next sentence starts
	immediately, despite the fact that there is not a complete sentence, or
	fullstop for that matter before it :)

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- patch-aa begins here ---
Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/explaining-bsd/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.3 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	17 Jul 2001 22:20:42 -0000	1.3
+++ article.sgml	23 Sep 2001 18:11:44 -0000
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para><emphasis>Core team</emphasis> In addition, FreeBSD
+	  <para>The <emphasis>Core team</emphasis>. In addition, FreeBSD
 	    and NetBSD each have a core team which manages the project.  The
 	    core teams developed in the course of the projects, and their role
 	    is not always well-defined.  It is not necessary to be a developer
--- patch-aa ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: murray 
State-Changed-When: Sun Sep 23 19:38:11 PDT 2001 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed with slight modifications, thanks! 


http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=30774 
>Unformatted:
