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From: Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi>
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Subject: Two mistypings in fdp-primer
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>Number:         29852
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Two mistypings in fdp-primer
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Aug 18 13:10:00 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:    Thu Aug 23 14:23:07 PDT 2001
>Last-Modified:  Thu Aug 23 14:23:16 PDT 2001
>Originator:     Vladimir Tchoukharev
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.4-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi 4.4-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.4-PRERELEASE #3: Fri Aug 3 08:56:25 EEST 2001 root@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/H33 i386

>Description:
	In the patch below I try to correct two minor errors I faced.

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml.orig	Sat Aug 18 22:47:06 2001
+++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug 18 22:47:13 2001
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para><application>Make</application> syntax is quickly revised as
-      the we explore these types.</para>
+      then we explore these types.</para>
 
     <sect2 id="sub-make">
       <title>Subdirectory Makefiles</title>
--- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml.orig	Sat Aug 18 22:43:17 2001
+++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug 18 22:43:27 2001
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 	  space.</para>
 	
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webuild</userinput></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput></screen>
       </step>
 
       <step>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org>
To: Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/29852: Two mistypings in fdp-primer 
Date: Sun, 19 Aug 2001 16:56:30 -0700

 Vladimir Tchoukharev <chu@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi> writes:
 > --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml.orig
 > 	Sat Aug 18 22:47:06 2001
 > +++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug
 >  18 22:47:13 2001
 > @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 >      </itemizedlist>
 >  
 >      <para><application>Make</application> syntax is quickly revised as
 > -      the we explore these types.</para>
 > +      then we explore these types.</para>
 
 I can't make sense out of this paragraph before or after the change.
 This document doesn't revise make(1) syntax!  Unless somebody can
 figure out what it's trying to say, I'm going to nuke it in a few
 days.  It doesn't seem to serve any useful purpose.
 
 >      <sect2 id="sub-make">
 >        <title>Subdirectory Makefiles</title>
 > --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml.orig
 > 	Sat Aug 18 22:43:17 2001
 > +++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml
 > 	Sat Aug 18 22:43:27 2001
 > @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 >  	  space.</para>
 >  	
 >  	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput>
 > -&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webuild</userinput></screen>
 > +&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput></screen>
 
 This I've fixed, thanks!
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: dd 
State-Changed-When: Thu Aug 23 14:23:07 PDT 2001 
State-Changed-Why:  
All issues resolved, thanks! 

http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=29852 
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