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Subject: [PATCH] Typos in en-handbook/serialcomms
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>Number:         28906
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Typos in en-handbook/serialcomms
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jul 12 00:30:02 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:    Thu Jul 12 01:29:00 PDT 2001
>Last-Modified:  Thu Jul 12 01:29:10 PDT 2001
>Originator:     Peter J. Avalos
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD oxygen.theshell.com 4.3-STABLE FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE #0: Tue Jul 10 11:41:59 PDT 2001 support@oxygen.theshell.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OXYGEN i386


	
>Description:
	Spelling and grammar errors in serialcomms chapter of handbook
>How-To-Repeat:
	Read the serialcomms chapter of handbook
>Fix:

Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.24
diff -u -r1.24 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	2001/04/17 01:37:48	1.24
+++ chapter.sgml	2001/07/12 07:13:32
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@
 	prompt.  If the data rates do not match, <command>getty</command> sees
 	anything the user types as <quote>junk</quote>, tries going to the next
 	speed and gives the <prompt>login:</prompt> prompt again.  This
-	procedure can continue ad nauseum, but normally only takes a keystroke
+	procedure can continue ad nauseam, but normally only takes a keystroke
 	or two before the user sees a good prompt.  Obviously, this login
 	sequence does not look as clean as the former
 	<quote>locked-speed</quote> method, but a user on a low-speed
@@ -1992,12 +1992,12 @@
     <sect2 id="serialconsole-intro">
       <title>Introduction</title>
       
-      <para>The FreeBSD/i386 operating system can boot on a system with  only
+      <para>The FreeBSD/i386 operating system can boot on a system with only
 	a dumb terminal on a serial port as a console.  Such a configuration
-	should be useful for two classes of people; system administrators who
-	wish to install FreeBSD on a dedicated file/compute/terminal server
-	machines that have no keyboard or monitor attached, and developers who
-	want to debug the kernel or device drivers.</para>
+	should be useful for two classes of people:  system administrators who
+	wish to install FreeBSD on machines that have no keyboard or monitor
+	attached, and developers who want to debug the kernel or device
+	drivers.</para>
   
       <para>Starting from version 3.1, FreeBSD/i386 employs a three stage
 	bootstrap.  The first two stages are in the boot block code which is
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: dd 
State-Changed-When: Thu Jul 12 01:29:00 PDT 2001 
State-Changed-Why:  
applied, thanks! 

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