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Subject: various typo and tag fixes in articles/formatting-media
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>Number:         28777
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       various typo and tag fixes in articles/formatting-media
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    nik
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jul 06 11:40:01 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:    Wed Jul 11 17:37:48 PDT 2001
>Last-Modified:  Wed Jul 11 17:38:01 PDT 2001
>Originator:     Giorgos Keramidas
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #0: Sun Jun 24 18:34:43 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386

>Description:

	The attached patch corrects various typos that I found in
	articles/formatting-media.  It also adds <filename> or
	<devicename> tags around device names, in some places.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- patch begins here ---
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.16 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml	2001/06/04 03:04:38	1.16
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/formatting-media/article.sgml	2001/07/06 17:51:04
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
 	    composed of contiguous sectors.  Slices are recorded in a
 	    <quote>slice table</quote> used by the system BIOS to
 	    locate bootable partitions.  The slice table is usually
-	    called the Partition Table in DOS parlance.  Maintained by
+	    called the <quote>partition table</quote> in DOS parlance.  Maintained by
 	    the fdisk utility.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
 	</step>
 
 	<step>
-	  <para>When warned about Writing on installed systems, answer
+	  <para>When warned about writing on installed systems, answer
 	    <command>Yes</command>.</para>
 	</step> 
 
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@
 	<step>
 	  <para>Enter <command>W</command> when done and confirm to
 	    continue.  The filesystem will be newfs'd for you, unless
-	    you select otherwise (for news partitions you'll want to
+	    you select otherwise (for new partitions you'll want to
 	    do this!).  You'll get the error: 
 
 	    <informalexample>
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Making Dedicated Mode Disks Using the Command Line</title>
 
-      <para>Execute the following commands, replacing ad2 with the
+      <para>Execute the following commands, replacing <devicename>ad2</devicename> with the
 	disk name.</para>
 
       <informalexample>
@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@
 
       <para>The command line is the easiest way to make dedicated
 	disks, and the worst way to make compatibility disks.  The
-	command-line fdisk utility requires higher math skills and an
+	command-line <command>fdisk</command> utility requires higher math skills and an
 	in-depth understanding of the slice table, which is more than
 	most people want to deal with.  Use sysinstall for
 	compatibility disks, as described below.</para>
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@
 
 	<step>
 	  <para>The filesystem will be newfs'd for you, unless you
-	    select otherwise (for news partitions you'll want to do
+	    select otherwise (for new partitions you'll want to do
 	    this!).  You'll get the error:
 
 	    <informalexample>
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@
 	    </programlisting>
 	  </informalexample>
 	  
-	  <para>Change /dev/ad0b to the device of the newly added
+	  <para>Change <filename>/dev/ad0b</filename> to the device of the newly added
 	    space.</para>
 	</step>
 
@@ -591,13 +591,11 @@
       be at least 128 kB, and it should not be not be a power of 2.</para>
 
       <para>Now you can mount and use your CCD by referencing device
-	/dev/ccd0c.</para>
-<para>
-A more powerful and flexible alternative to CCD is Vinum.  See the <ulink
-URL="http://www.vinumvm.org/">Vinum Project home page</ulink> for further
-details
-</para>
+	<filename>/dev/ccd0c</filename>.</para>
 
+      <para>A more powerful and flexible alternative to CCD is Vinum.  See the
+        <ulink URL="http://www.vinumvm.org/">Vinum Project home page</ulink>
+        for further details.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
--- patch ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: dd 
State-Changed-When: Wed Jul 11 17:37:48 PDT 2001 
State-Changed-Why:  
nik applied this but forgot to close it. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->nik 
Responsible-Changed-By: dd 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Jul 11 17:37:48 PDT 2001 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
JFYI 

http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=28777 
>Unformatted:
