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From: bmah@cisco.com (Bruce A. Mah)
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Subject: [patch] Fix typos in RELENG_4 README.TXT
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>Number:         19583
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Fix typos in RELENG_4 README.TXT
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jun 29 09:50:00 PDT 2000
>Closed-Date:    Wed Jul 12 22:49:04 BST 2000
>Last-Modified:  Wed Jul 12 22:51:38 BST 2000
>Originator:     Bruce A. Mah
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.0-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
Cisco Systems, Inc.
>Environment:

RELENG_4

>Description:

If I'd done a proper job proofreading in my last PR for this file,
I'd have caught these problems too...

1.  Fix repeated "from".

2.  Whitespace changes.

>How-To-Repeat:

	

>Fix:

Index: README.TXT
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/local/cvsroot/src/release/texts/README.TXT,v
retrieving revision 1.9.2.3
diff -c -r1.9.2.3 README.TXT
*** README.TXT	2000/06/26 15:46:18	1.9.2.3
--- README.TXT	2000/06/29 16:40:35
***************
*** 32,38 ****
  getting into here (e.g. you've been following -stable) then this
  snapshot is probably for you.  If you're more interested in doing
  business with FreeBSD than in playing with the cutting edge of
! technology, however, then 3.x or one of the 4.x releases,  is almost 
  certainly your best bet.
  
  Most information here is also available from the Documentation menu
--- 32,38 ----
  getting into here (e.g. you've been following -stable) then this
  snapshot is probably for you.  If you're more interested in doing
  business with FreeBSD than in playing with the cutting edge of
! technology, however, then 3.x or one of the 4.x releases, is almost 
  certainly your best bet.
  
  Most information here is also available from the Documentation menu
***************
*** 52,58 ****
                  If you are installing from floppies, it is especially
                  important that you read this section!
  
- 
    HARDWARE.TXT  Information about the configuration of the GENERIC kernel
                  and supported hardware.  New installers should read this
                  file.
--- 52,57 ----
***************
*** 75,87 ****
  you can also install one of our "snapshot" releases.
  
  For the most up-to-date software along the RELENG_3 branch
! (also known as 3.5-stable), please install your snapshots from from:
  
          ftp://releng3.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/
  
  For the most up-to-date software along the RELENG_4 branch
  (also known as 4.0-stable), now proceeding towards the release
! of FreeBSD 4.1, please install your snapshots from from:
  
          ftp://releng4.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/
  
--- 74,86 ----
  you can also install one of our "snapshot" releases.
  
  For the most up-to-date software along the RELENG_3 branch
! (also known as 3.5-stable), please install your snapshots from:
  
          ftp://releng3.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/
  
  For the most up-to-date software along the RELENG_4 branch
  (also known as 4.0-stable), now proceeding towards the release
! of FreeBSD 4.1, please install your snapshots from:
  
          ftp://releng4.freebsd.org/pub/FreeBSD/
  

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: John Baldwin <jhb@bsdi.com>
To: bmah@cisco.com
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/19583: [patch] Fix typos in RELENG_4 README.TXT
Date: Fri, 30 Jun 2000 17:37:48 -0700

 "(Bruce A. Mah)" wrote:
 > >Fix:
 > 
 > Index: README.TXT
 > ===================================================================
 > RCS file: /usr/local/cvsroot/src/release/texts/README.TXT,v
 > retrieving revision 1.9.2.3
 > diff -c -r1.9.2.3 README.TXT
 > *** README.TXT  2000/06/26 15:46:18     1.9.2.3
 > --- README.TXT  2000/06/29 16:40:35
 > ***************
 > *** 32,38 ****
 >   getting into here (e.g. you've been following -stable) then this
 >   snapshot is probably for you.  If you're more interested in doing
 >   business with FreeBSD than in playing with the cutting edge of
 > ! technology, however, then 3.x or one of the 4.x releases,  is almost
 >   certainly your best bet.
 > 
 >   Most information here is also available from the Documentation menu
 > --- 32,38 ----
 >   getting into here (e.g. you've been following -stable) then this
 >   snapshot is probably for you.  If you're more interested in doing
 >   business with FreeBSD than in playing with the cutting edge of
 > ! technology, however, then 3.x or one of the 4.x releases, is almost
 >   certainly your best bet.
 
 The changed line here should actually read as this:
 
 technology, however, then 3.x, or one of the 4.x releases, is almost
 
 or this:
 
 technology, however, then 3.x or one of the 4.x releases is almost
 
 Comments?
 
 -- 
 
 John Baldwin <jhb@bsdi.com> -- http://www.FreeBSD.org/~jhb/
 PGP Key: http://www.cslab.vt.edu/~jobaldwi/pgpkey.asc
 "Power Users Use the Power to Serve!"  -  http://www.FreeBSD.org/
 

From: bmah@cisco.com (Bruce A. Mah)
To: John Baldwin <jhb@bsdi.com>
Cc: bmah@cisco.com, FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/19583: [patch] Fix typos in RELENG_4 README.TXT 
Date: Sat, 01 Jul 2000 22:46:56 -0700

 --==_Exmh_1033313552P
 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
 
 If memory serves me right, John Baldwin wrote:
 > "(Bruce A. Mah)" wrote:
 > > >Fix:
 > > 
 > > Index: README.TXT
 > > ===================================================================
 > > RCS file: /usr/local/cvsroot/src/release/texts/README.TXT,v
 > > retrieving revision 1.9.2.3
 > > diff -c -r1.9.2.3 README.TXT
 > > *** README.TXT  2000/06/26 15:46:18     1.9.2.3
 > > --- README.TXT  2000/06/29 16:40:35
 > > ***************
 > > *** 32,38 ****
 > >   getting into here (e.g. you've been following -stable) then this
 > >   snapshot is probably for you.  If you're more interested in doing
 > >   business with FreeBSD than in playing with the cutting edge of
 > > ! technology, however, then 3.x or one of the 4.x releases,  is almost
 > >   certainly your best bet.
 > > 
 > >   Most information here is also available from the Documentation menu
 > > --- 32,38 ----
 > >   getting into here (e.g. you've been following -stable) then this
 > >   snapshot is probably for you.  If you're more interested in doing
 > >   business with FreeBSD than in playing with the cutting edge of
 > > ! technology, however, then 3.x or one of the 4.x releases, is almost
 > >   certainly your best bet.
 > 
 > The changed line here should actually read as this:
 > 
 > technology, however, then 3.x, or one of the 4.x releases, is almost
 > 
 > or this:
 > 
 > technology, however, then 3.x or one of the 4.x releases is almost
 > 
 > Comments?
 
 Yep, you're right (don't show this to my old English teachers).  I think
 the latter expresses the correct sentiments a little better, at least as
 how I interpret them.
 
 Thanks,
 
 Bruce.
 
 
 
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: ben 
State-Changed-When: Wed Jul 12 22:49:04 BST 2000 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=19583 
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