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From: Daniel Harris <dannyboy@dannyboy.eyep.net>
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Subject: Minor grammar nit: internet.html
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>Number:         18632
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Minor grammar nit: internet.html
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed May 17 18:10:00 PDT 2000
>Closed-Date:    Mon May 22 16:19:43 PDT 2000
>Last-Modified:  Mon May 22 16:20:02 PDT 2000
>Originator:     Daniel Harris
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.0-STABLE i386
>Organization:
Pedants-R-US
>Environment:

	

>Description:

	The FreeBSD development team changes from singular to plural:

The FreeBSD development team is as concerned about security as they are about performance.

>How-To-Repeat:

	

>Fix:

	Change "as they are" to "as it is".	


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Daniel Harris <dannyboy@subdimension.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, dannyboy@subdimension.com
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/18632: Minor grammar nit: internet.html
Date: Thu, 18 May 2000 21:49:57 -0400

 Suggestion from: William Richard <wdr@tdl.com>
 
 "The FreeBSD developers are as concerned about security as they are
 about
 performance."
 
 I agree completely.
 
 -- 
 Daniel Harris
 dannyboy@subdimension.com
 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: jim 
State-Changed-When: Mon May 22 16:19:43 PDT 2000 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 
>Unformatted:
