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Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2014 08:32:23 GMT
From: Jack Force <jack1243star@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Handbook typo
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>Number:         185632
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Handbook typo
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    remko
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jan 10 08:40:00 UTC 2014
>Closed-Date:    Fri Jan 10 13:49:01 UTC 2014
>Last-Modified:  Fri Jan 10 13:50:01 UTC 2014
>Originator:     Jack Force
>Release:        
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
There is a typo in the Handbook.
Section 27.6.1. "Basic Configuration", first paragraph:

"If order to have..." => "In order to have..."

The following paragraph also starts with "In order to..." which is overly verbose.
>How-To-Repeat:
Navigate to the following URL:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/mail-advanced.html
>Fix:
The diff file attached makes the sentence more clear and concise.

Patch attached with submission follows:

Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	(revision 43462)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	(working copy)
@@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@
 
       <para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as
 	long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or
-	the network has access to a configured
-	<acronym>DNS</acronym> server.  If order to have mail
-	delivered to the  <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host,
-	do one of the following:</para>
+	the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym>
+	server.  To have mail delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym>
+	on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->remko 
Responsible-Changed-By: remko 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Jan 10 08:46:20 UTC 2014 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take this PR 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=185632 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: remko 
State-Changed-When: Fri Jan 10 13:49:00 UTC 2014 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed. Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=185632 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/185632: commit references a PR
Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2014 13:48:43 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: remko
 Date: Fri Jan 10 13:48:36 2014
 New Revision: 43464
 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43464
 
 Log:
   Correct a typo and rewrap the paragraph a bit so that it is
   conform the FDP.
   
   PR:		185632
   Submitted by:	Jack Force
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	Fri Jan 10 11:03:44 2014	(r43463)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.xml	Fri Jan 10 13:48:36 2014	(r43464)
 @@ -1028,10 +1028,9 @@ www.example.org</programlisting>
  
        <para>Out of the box, one can send email to external hosts as
  	long as <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> is configured or
 -	the network has access to a configured
 -	<acronym>DNS</acronym> server.  If order to have mail
 -	delivered to the  <acronym>MTA</acronym> on the &os; host,
 -	do one of the following:</para>
 +	the network has access to a configured <acronym>DNS</acronym>
 +	server.  To have email delivered to the <acronym>MTA</acronym>
 +	on the &os; host, do one of the following:</para>
  
        <itemizedlist>
  	<listitem>
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