From db@db.net  Thu Dec 12 23:59:08 2013
Return-Path: <db@db.net>
Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1])
	(using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits))
	(No client certificate requested)
	by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1470488E
	for <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org>; Thu, 12 Dec 2013 23:59:08 +0000 (UTC)
Received: from diana.db.net (unknown [IPv6:2620:64:0:1:223:7dff:fea2:c8f2])
	by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F2A3B1604
	for <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org>; Thu, 12 Dec 2013 23:59:07 +0000 (UTC)
Received: from night.db.net (localhost [127.0.0.1])
	by diana.db.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3804E2AA49E
	for <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org>; Thu, 12 Dec 2013 16:59:05 -0700 (MST)
Received: by night.db.net (Postfix, from userid 1000)
	id 111AC1CC02; Thu, 12 Dec 2013 18:58:31 -0500 (EST)
Message-Id: <20131212235831.111AC1CC02@night.db.net>
Date: Thu, 12 Dec 2013 18:58:31 -0500 (EST)
From: Diane Bruce <db@db.net>
Reply-To: Diane Bruce <db@db.net>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Cc:
Subject: Odd grammar
X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.114
X-GNATS-Notify:

>Number:         184735
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Odd grammar
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    wblock
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Dec 13 00:00:00 UTC 2013
>Closed-Date:    Fri Dec 13 01:27:38 UTC 2013
>Last-Modified:  Fri Dec 13 01:30:00 UTC 2013
>Originator:     Diane Bruce
>Release:        FreeBSD 9.1-STABLE amd64
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD night.db.net 9.1-STABLE FreeBSD 9.1-STABLE #17 r249713: Sat Apr 20 18:27:18 EST 2013 root@night.db.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC amd64


	
>Description:
	Odd grammar
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	


Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	(revision 43325)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	(working copy)
@@ -3844,7 +3844,7 @@
       <sect2 xml:id="uses">
 	<title><varname>USES</varname></title>
 
-	<para>There several parameters exist for defining different
+	<para>Several parameters exist for defining different
 	  kind of features and dependencies that the port in question
 	  uses.  They can be specified by adding the following line to
 	  the <filename>Makefile</filename> of the port:</para>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->wblock 
Responsible-Changed-By: wblock 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Dec 13 01:18:45 UTC 2013 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Take. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=184735 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: wblock 
State-Changed-When: Fri Dec 13 01:27:07 UTC 2013 
State-Changed-Why:  
Expanded correction committed.  Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=184735 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/184735: commit references a PR
Date: Fri, 13 Dec 2013 01:26:54 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: wblock
 Date: Fri Dec 13 01:26:47 2013
 New Revision: 43326
 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43326
 
 Log:
   Improve grammar, clarity.  Expanded modifications inspired by PR.
   
   PR:		docs/184735
   Submitted by:	Diane Bruce <db@db.net>
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Wed Dec 11 05:00:42 2013	(r43325)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Fri Dec 13 01:26:47 2013	(r43326)
 @@ -3844,14 +3844,14 @@ ALWAYS_KEEP_DISTFILES=	yes
        <sect2 xml:id="uses">
  	<title><varname>USES</varname></title>
  
 -	<para>There several parameters exist for defining different
 -	  kind of features and dependencies that the port in question
 -	  uses.  They can be specified by adding the following line to
 -	  the <filename>Makefile</filename> of the port:</para>
 +	<para>Parameters can be added to define different
 +	  features and dependencies used by the port.
 +	  They are specified by adding this line to the
 +	  <filename>Makefile</filename>:</para>
  
  	<programlisting>USES= feature[:arguments]</programlisting>
  
 -	<para>For the complete list of such values, please see
 +	<para>For the complete list of values, please see
  	  <xref linkend="uses-values"/>.</para>
  
  	<warning>
 _______________________________________________
 svn-doc-all@freebsd.org mailing list
 http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all
 To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-doc-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org"
 
>Unformatted:
