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From: Mike Brown <mike@skew.org>
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Subject: First question in FreeBSD FAQ has grammatical error
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>Number:         182087
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       First question in FreeBSD FAQ has grammatical error
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    issyl0
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Sep 14 12:20:00 UTC 2013
>Closed-Date:    Fri Sep 27 08:07:00 UTC 2013
>Last-Modified:  Fri Sep 27 08:10:00 UTC 2013
>Originator:     Mike Brown
>Release:        FreeBSD 8.4-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
n/a
>Description:
In the FreeBSD FAQ, in both places where the first question appears, the question is 
an incomplete sentence.
>How-To-Repeat:
See http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/misc.html where it says "15.1. 
FreeBSD a lot of swap space even when the computer has free memory left. Why?"
>Fix:
Insert the word "uses" after "FreeBSD", or perhaps rephrase the question to ask "Why does 
FreeBSD use a lot of swap space, even when the computer has free memory left?"


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->issyl0 
Responsible-Changed-By: issyl0 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Sep 27 07:56:07 UTC 2013 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take it. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=182087 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: issyl0 
State-Changed-When: Fri Sep 27 08:06:59 UTC 2013 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed. Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=182087 

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Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/182087: commit references a PR
Date: Fri, 27 Sep 2013 08:03:37 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: issyl0
 Date: Fri Sep 27 08:03:30 2013
 New Revision: 42716
 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42716
 
 Log:
   Add a missing word to a sentence in a FAQ question.
   
   PR:		docs/182087
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Sep 27 07:52:16 2013	(r42715)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Sep 27 08:03:30 2013	(r42716)
 @@ -7236,7 +7236,7 @@ hint.sio.7.irq="12"</programlisting>
      <qandaset>
        <qandaentry>
  	<question id="more-swap">
 -	  <para>&os; a lot of swap space even when the computer has
 +	  <para>&os; uses a lot of swap space even when the computer has
  	    free memory left.  Why?</para>
  	</question>
  
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