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Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2013 00:37:21 GMT
From: Li <fender0107401@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Missing a word(a nother solution).
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>Number:         182004
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Missing a word(a nother solution).
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Sep 11 00:40:00 UTC 2013
>Closed-Date:    Fri Sep 13 08:48:10 UTC 2013
>Last-Modified:  Fri Sep 13 08:48:10 UTC 2013
>Originator:     Li
>Release:        9.1 Release
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>Description:
I am sorry.

I reported this problem a few minutes ago, but I did not give a perfect solution.

In our handbook: 7.5.3. KMyMoney

Here is the original sentence:
KMyMoney is a personal finance created by the KDE community.

I think the better one should be:
KMyMoney is a personal financial tool created by the KDE community.

============================================================

In other words, I think we should add tool and also change finance to financial.
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: gavin 
State-Changed-When: Fri Sep 13 08:46:41 UTC 2013 
State-Changed-Why:  
Close as duplicate of docs/182003 by same submitter, which has a 
slightly more correct solution. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=182004 
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