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From: Ivn Alemn <ivan@alemani.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Typo under 4.5 section on Handbook
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>Number:         181583
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [handbook] [patch] typo under 4.5 section on Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Aug 27 13:30:00 UTC 2013
>Closed-Date:    Wed Aug 28 08:15:11 UTC 2013
>Last-Modified:  Wed Aug 28 08:20:01 UTC 2013
>Originator:     Ivn Alemn
>Release:        
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
Reading through the Handbook on:

http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disk-organization.html

The URL points to section "4.5 Disk Organization" in which between the "Partition | Convention" and the "Table 4.1. Disk Device Codes" there is this paragraph with a typo, the paragraph in question is:

"Disks in FreeBSD are divided into slices, referred to in Windows as partitions, which are numbered from 1 to 4. These are then then divided into partitions, which contain file systems, and are labeled using letters."

The typo is that the word "then" after the first dot (.) is repeated twice which causes to misread the sentence. 

>How-To-Repeat:
Go to:

http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disk-organization.html

Find the following paragraph:

"Disks in FreeBSD are divided into slices, referred to in Windows as partitions, which are numbered from 1 to 4. These are then then divided into partitions, which contain file systems, and are labeled using letters."

Reading the paragraph, notice that the word "then" which is repeated twice. This glitch is found after the first dot (.) at the start of the sentence.

>Fix:
Deleting one of the "then" words will fix the sentence, which should read like this:

"Disks in FreeBSD are divided into slices, referred to in Windows as partitions, which are numbered from 1 to 4. These are then divided into partitions, which contain file systems, and are labeled using letters."

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-bugs->freebsd-doc 
Responsible-Changed-By: linimon 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Aug 27 23:58:39 UTC 2013 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
reclassify. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=181583 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: maxim 
State-Changed-When: Wed Aug 28 08:14:43 UTC 2013 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed.  Thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=181583 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/181583: commit references a PR
Date: Wed, 28 Aug 2013 08:14:49 +0000 (UTC)

 Author: maxim
 Date: Wed Aug 28 08:14:34 2013
 New Revision: 42594
 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42594
 
 Log:
   "then then" -> "then".
   
   PR:		misc/181583
   Submitted by:	Ivan Aleman
 
 Modified:
   head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
 
 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
 ==============================================================================
 --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml	Tue Aug 27 17:17:47 2013	(r42593)
 +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml	Wed Aug 28 08:14:34 2013	(r42594)
 @@ -1381,7 +1381,7 @@ root     5211  0.0  0.2  3620  1724   2 
  
      <para>Disks in &os; are divided into slices, referred to in
        &windows; as partitions, which are numbered from 1 to 4.  These
 -      are then then divided into partitions, which contain file
 +      are then divided into partitions, which contain file
        systems, and are labeled using letters.</para>
  
      <indexterm><primary>slices</primary></indexterm>
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